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PAGE第1講添加合理的細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)依據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示完成下列句子。1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunicationbetweenpeople.Forexample,moreandmorepeoplearenotpayingattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，許多人越來(lái)越不重視面對(duì)面的溝通)．2．Atthatmoment,IbecamethefocusofthewholeclassandIwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence(我充溢了驕傲和自信)．3．IsuggestthattheteacherselectproperEnglishfilmsforus,thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinteresting(這樣就使得我們的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)更加好玩)．4．Ifpossible(假如可能的話),I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreabouttoday'ssociety(以便我能更多地了解當(dāng)今社會(huì))．5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme(令我興奮的是，他們進(jìn)步很快而且他們的父母對(duì)我評(píng)價(jià)很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstotheprotectionoftheenvironment(盡力為環(huán)境愛護(hù)做出更多貢獻(xiàn))．在高考試題的書面表達(dá)的“留意”中明確要求：可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)的方法詳細(xì)如下：1．列舉詳細(xì)的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明①我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththembesidesdoingsomehousework.②我看到了一些不良行為。Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一個(gè)充溢活力的健康男孩，我特別喜愛體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingwithmyclassmates.2．增加相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容①過(guò)去我有時(shí)去村西的小河里游泳。Iwentswimmingintherivertothewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintherivertothewestofthevillagenowandthen,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增加相關(guān)的緣由、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容①我須要好好休息，我要做些閱讀。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswellasforknowledge.②慈善拍賣會(huì)募集的錢將送給急需的人。Themoneycollectedatthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneycollectedatthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemoutofdifficulties,butalsogivethemwarmthandhappiness.③演講時(shí)要面帶微笑。要講慢些，講清晰。Youshouldwearasmilewhenyoumakeaspeech.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearly.→Youshouldwearasmilewhenyoumakeaspeech,whichwillmakeyourelaxed.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearlysothatyoucanleaveagoodimpressionontheaudienceandjudges.4．結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、愿望、倡議等①AlthoughIwasverytiredduringthissummerholidays,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個(gè)人感受)盡管我這個(gè)暑假很累，但是我為我做的感到興奮。②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評(píng)價(jià))我認(rèn)為這樣的活動(dòng)很有必要也很有意義。③Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.(愿望)我誠(chéng)心希望我的建議能夠?qū)δ阌兴鶐椭?，你能夠享受你在新學(xué)校的生活。④Asstudents,it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironment.(倡議)作為學(xué)生，愛護(hù)我們的校內(nèi)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。依據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，給短文增加合理恰當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)微環(huán)節(jié)。DearPeter，InyourletteryouaskedhowtowinthefavorofChineseuniversities.Ithinktherearethreemainaspectstobeconsidered.Firstly,masteringChineseisabasicneedtoliveinChina.1．Withthisability,youcancommunicatewithnativespeakerseasilyandhaveaccesstomanyresources(有了這種實(shí)力，你與當(dāng)?shù)厝藴贤ň蜁?huì)很簡(jiǎn)單，而且還可以獲得許多資源).Besides,itisimportanttoadapttothenewenvironmentquickly.2．Thesooneryougetusedtoit,themorebeneficialitwillbecometoyou(你熟識(shí)新環(huán)境越早，好處就越多).Finally,personalinterestsandhobbiesarealsohighlyvalued.3．Youaresupposedtochooseamajorthatyou