專升本寫作句型練習課件

1、第一章 句式優(yōu)化不同的思想內(nèi)容當然應(yīng)該用不同的句式來表達而同一思想內(nèi)容也可以用不同句式來表達句式不同，表達的效果就不同一篇文章中如果反復(fù)使用同一句式，就會顯得單調(diào)乏味，毫無生氣，寫作時一定要注意句式的變換，避免單一重復(fù)1.長句和短句變換長句使文章富有氣勢，卻容易產(chǎn)生語法錯誤或造成理解障礙；短句不容易出錯，但是短句的堆砌容易讓人感覺語言技巧不成熟，不老練在實際寫作中，一味地采用長句或短句都是不可取的，要注意長短句的交錯使用通常簡單而又實用的長短句交錯方法是：以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，配以適當?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)合句簡單句可長可短，一般要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語，不定式短語，介詞短語，副詞短語等第1頁，共25頁。第

2、一章 句式優(yōu)化1. 短句變長句原文Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them.優(yōu)化Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them.受漢語思維習慣影響，很多考生往往會直接將腦子里的意思議程英語，而忽略句與句之間的聯(lián)系，導(dǎo)致寫出來的句子無法體現(xiàn)英語作為“形合語言”的特點因此，在平時寫作時，考生要注意前后句之間的聯(lián)系，用恰當?shù)倪B

3、接詞將簡單句連接起來，組成準確地道的復(fù)雜長句增加文章的氣勢一長句和短句變換第2頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句原文Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.優(yōu)化Pressured by school work. and encouraged by their peers, teenagers ofte

4、n resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes.原文Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation.優(yōu)化Usually, a fact is defined as a truth, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation.第3頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句4原文When I turned

5、 right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbikes. The car was yellow. The motorbike fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons in

6、juries. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. the traffic police arrived in a short time.4優(yōu)化When I turned right on the corner, a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly i

7、njured. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two persons injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time, the traffic police arrived.第4頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化一長句和短句變換2.長句變短句原文His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight.優(yōu)化His father, a salesman, became a mi

8、llionaire overnight.長句固然能表達出復(fù)雜而縝密的思想，但如果片面最求復(fù)雜句式，反而會顯得華而不實，累贅寫作中句子的長短應(yīng)根據(jù)表達的需要而定，有話則長，無話則短短句不僅指句子長度較短，也指句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)精練，簡潔是寫作的一個重要原則，用詞累贅則是寫作的忌第5頁，共25頁。2.長句變短句原文He didnt have enough experience, which is the reason why he didnt do the work well.優(yōu)化He didnt do the work well for lack of experience.原文Perhaps the

9、y basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly.優(yōu)化They distrusted our judgment.第6頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句4原文A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage, perhaps because they are still establishing themselves in their careers and havent had enough time to get to kno

10、w themselves and many members of the opposite sex, but family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married, and so they marry in haste without knowing each other well.4優(yōu)化A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage. As they

11、 are still establishing themselves in their careers, they havent had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex. However, family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married. So they marry in haste without knowing each other we

12、ll.第7頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化與漢語相比，英語更注重動作本身，而不是動作的執(zhí)行者，因此在英語中被動語態(tài)的使用相對多一些，但這并不表明要以為地追求被動語態(tài)的使用事實上，什么時候用主動，什么時候用被動，主要是由陳述對象而定英語寫作特別強調(diào)陳述對象的一致性，因此在選擇主動和被動時一定要慎重1.主動變被動原文We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country.優(yōu)化More attention should be paid to the elderly

13、 who had devoted their youth and energy to our country.二主動句和被動句變換第8頁，共25頁。2.長句變短句原文When the prime minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. 優(yōu)化When the prime minister arrived at the airport, he was immediately surrounded by hundreds of reporters. 原文The employe

14、es elected Mr. li chairman of the committee last week.優(yōu)化Mr. li was elected chairman of the committee by the employees last week.第9頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化原文Not how much you read but what you read really matters.優(yōu)化It is not how much you read but what you read that really matters.三強調(diào)句和倒裝句變換2原文By making good us

15、e of internet we can make a difference in our life.2優(yōu)化Only by making good use of internet can we make a difference in our life.適當運用強調(diào)句和倒裝句可以起到突出，強調(diào)的作用，達到較強的修飾效果，給讀者留下深刻印象第10頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句3原文We have grown so old because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather

16、 than because of any change in the death rate.3優(yōu)化It is because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate, that we have grown so old.第11頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化原文When I look into the future, I will try my best to serve my fell

17、ow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union.優(yōu)化Looking into the future, I will try my best to serve my fellow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union.四非謂語句和從句變換非謂語動詞包括不定式動名詞現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞使用非謂語動詞可以在有限的空間內(nèi)表達更多的信息，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，邏輯嚴密第12頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句2原文The law can punish thos

18、e who produce or sell fake commodities.2優(yōu)化The law can punish those producing or selling fake commodities.3原文Because one of my parents is laid off, my family wont possibly afford all my expenses at college.3優(yōu)化With one of my parents being laid off, my family wont possibly afford all my expenses at col

19、lege.第13頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化原文Some students dont like having roommates. Because every person has his or her own way, they think several people living together causes some unpleasantness. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship.優(yōu)化Some students dont like having roommates. they think several pe

20、ople living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship.五松散句和掉尾變換松散句主要用來陳述觀點和羅列事實，因此文中絕大多數(shù)句子都是松散句，正是由于這個緣故，偶爾使用掉尾句會起到突出的效果，但如果頻繁的使用掉尾句，則會使文章的意思表達不夠直接名了，給讀者做作的感覺第14頁，共25頁。1. 短句變長句2原文A new pattern of urban living

21、 has emerged in most big cities, as many of urban dwellers have moved to the suburban rings in search of cleaner air, greater privacy and a higher quality of life.2優(yōu)化As many of urban dwellers have moved to the suburban rings in search of cleaner air, greater privacy and a higher quality of life, a n

22、ew pattern of urban living has emerged in most big cities.第15頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化）just as, so (正如，也一樣)e.g. just as food is necessary to life, so are books to our spirit.六比較句變換表示相似性2）share / have in common (在方面有共同點)e.g. china and the u.s. have some interests in common in foreign trade area. .3）bear simila

23、rities/ resemblances to (和具有相似之處)e.g. lots of ancient constructions bear striking resemblance to that in other parts of the world, which discloses the similarity in human civilization.第16頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化六比較句變換5）vice versa/ the verse is true (反之亦然)e.g. if you are friendly to others, they will hold hos

24、pitable attitude towards you and vice versa.6）no less () than / no more () than (不比多強)e.g. the father is an ambitious man, the sons ambition is no less than the father.4）the same is true of / with (也是如此)e.g. people who are financially dependent will be bullied by the rich ones. And the same is true

25、with countries.7）as as (和一樣)e.g. some of the doctors are paid almost twice as much as the nurses.第17頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化） the opposite of (與恰恰相反)e.g. he hopes that his wife can give birth to a male inheritor to such a large fortune; whereas his wifes wish is just the opposite of his.六比較句變換2表示差異性2）it is j

26、ust the other way round, (，相反，)e.g. he is not your friend. It is just the other way round. He is your rival.第18頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化六比較句變換4）less () than (比少差） more () than (比多強)e.g. more and more people are buying new cars than ever before.3） different / differ from in that (和的不同之處在于)e.g. his character is

27、 different from his brother in that he is introvert.2表示差異性第19頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化）表轉(zhuǎn)折but, however, nevertheless, instead, on the other hand 七松散到緊湊變換如果遺篇文章只具有意義上的連貫，而形式上比較松散，就很難突出主題，較好的表達作者的意圖為了能使文章主題明確，線索明了，而句式富有變化，句與句之間，段與段之間需要一定的連接手段，寫作中常用的連接手段有：2）表讓步although, though, despite, even so, even if /though,

28、 regardless of, in spite of 使用過度性詞語第20頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化六比較句變換4）表舉例或列舉For example, for instance, as an illustration, such as 3）表層進first, to begin with, furthermore, besides, moreover, in addition, whats more, also and then, and equally important, last but not the least ）表總結(jié)in summary, in a word, in bri

29、ef, in conclusion, to conclude, in short, on the whole 第21頁，共25頁。第一章 句式優(yōu)化六比較句變換）表比較和對比While, whereas, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison with, compared with, on the contrary, in the contrast, by contrast ）表強調(diào)Indeed, of course, in particular, above all, most important, in fact 第22頁，共25頁。第一章

30、句式優(yōu)化六比較句變換例：Walters goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects. Walter become proficient in them; however, Walter forget that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. F