2023學(xué)年完整公開課版高中英語4Module4FineArts-Western,Chines

Whatisthevideoabout?Lead-in

Readthefollowingsampleofthank-youcard,andthenlearntowriteyourown.DearTom,Thankyouforinvitingmefordinner.Ihadaverygoodtimetonight.Yourfriend,JaneReadandTranslate

ChineseVersionoftheSample:親愛的xxx，謝謝你幫助我學(xué)英語，我通過了考試。你的朋友，

xxx

xxxReadandTranslate(Pairwork)

DearDuYue,ThankyouforhelpingmelearnEnglish.Ihavepassedtheexam.Yourfriend,JiangYuEnglishVersionoftheSample:Howtowriteacompletethank-youletter?假設(shè)你是李華。昨天你參加了學(xué)校組織的演講比賽，并榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。由于你的朋友Tina對你這次參賽提供了許多幫助，現(xiàn)在你想用英語給她寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹參賽情況2.告知獲獎(jiǎng)情況3.陳述獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)的感受注意：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。ExerciseBeforewritingacomposition,whatshouldwedoatfirst?1.Genre(審文體)：2.Person(審人稱)：3.Tense(審時(shí)態(tài))：4.Points(審要點(diǎn))：假設(shè)你是李華。昨天你參加了學(xué)校組織的演講比賽，并榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。由于你的朋友Tina對你這次參賽提供了許多幫助，現(xiàn)在你想用英語給她寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹參賽情況2.告知獲獎(jiǎng)情況3.陳述獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)的感受注意：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。alettermainlyinthefirst/secondpersonmainlyinthesimplepast/presenttensethekeypoints

ThreeParas.123TheStructure開頭段（問候/感謝的目的）中間段（感謝的原因/具體內(nèi)容）結(jié)尾段（補(bǔ)充說明+套話）DearTina,How'sitgoing?IamwritingthislettertotellyousomethingabouttheEnglishSpeechContestthatItookpartinyesterday.

Thankyouverymuchforyouradviceandkindhelp.Yours,LiHua

TheKeyParagraph(The2rdPara.)Step1:SimpleSentences(把要點(diǎn)寫成簡單句)Step2:TransitionalWords

(每要點(diǎn)前面加過渡詞）Step3:GoldenClothes

（前面添一添“黃金衣”句）Step4:SilverPants

（后面補(bǔ)一補(bǔ)“白銀褲”句型）假設(shè)你是李華。昨天你參加了學(xué)校組織的演講比賽，并榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。由于你的朋友Tina對你這次參賽提供了許多幫助，現(xiàn)在你想用英語給她寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹參賽情況2.告知獲獎(jiǎng)情況3.陳述獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)的感受注意：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。Exercise1.我感覺有點(diǎn)緊張。Ifeltabitnervous.2.我很幸運(yùn)。Iwaslucky.3.我很激動。Iwasexcited.Step1,SimpleSentence

把要點(diǎn)變成簡單句開始然后/此外最后Firstly,Secondly,Finally,Atfirst,Andthen,Atlast,Tobeginwith,Tostartwith,Firstofall,Besides,Moreover,What’smore,Inaddition,Moreimportantly,Mostimportantly,Inshort,Inaword,Intheend,Inconclusion,Firstandforemost,Additionally,Lastbutnotleast,Revision1,TransitionalWords

First

andforemost,

Ifeltabit

nervous.Additionally,Iwaslucky.Lastbutnotleast,

IwasexcitedStep2,TransitionalWords

每要點(diǎn)前面加過渡詞HaveatryRevision2,GoldenClothes

Itisclearthat

清（很清楚的是……)Itisobviousthat

明（很明顯的是……）Thereisnodoubtthat疑

(毫無疑問的是……)Noonecandenythat否

(不能否認(rèn)的是…….)Needlesstosay,

不用

(不用說,)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat

走（不用說……）

It'sclearthat

Ifeltabitnervous.It'sobviousthatIwaslucky.There'snodoubtthat

Iwasexcited.Step3,GoldenClothes

前面添一添“黃金衣”句Haveatry口訣：因?yàn)?以防/所以/如果/為了/只要/這件事因?yàn)椤?for…,…,inthat……,consideringthat…以防

…,incase,……,forfearthat…所以

…;therefore,……;asaresult,……;consequently,……;accordingly,…如果

…,if…為了

…,sothat……,inorderthat…只要…,aslongas…這件事…,which…Revision3,SilverPants

Ifeltabitnervous,inthat

manystudentstookpartinthiscompetition.

Iwaslucky,who

wontheFirstPrize.Iwasexcited,sothatIcan’twaittotellyouthegoodnews.

Step4,GoldenClothes

后面補(bǔ)一補(bǔ)“白銀褲”句型HaveatryFirstandforemost,it'sclearthat

Ifeltabitnervous,inthatmanystudentstookpartinthiscompetition.Additionally,it'sobviousthatIwaslucky,whowontheFirstPrize.

Lastbutnotleast,there'snodoubtthatIwasexcited,sothatIcan’twaittotellyouthegoodnews.TheKeyParagraph(The2ndPara.)

DearTina,

How'sitgoing?

IamwritingthislettertotellyousomethingabouttheEnglishSpeechContestItookpartinyesterday.

Firstandforemost,it'sclearthat

Ifeltabitnervous,inthatmanystudentstookpartinthiscompetition.Additionally,it'sobviousthatIwaslucky,whowontheFirstPrize.

Lastbutnotleast,there'snodoubtthatIwasexcited,sothatIcan’twaittotellyouthegoodnews.

Thankyouverymuchforyouradviceandkindhelp.

Yours,LiHua

Summary

AThank-youLetter

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