英語(yǔ)建議信寫作課件

Unit1Reading2

Discusstheproblemsthatpeoplewithwalkingdifficultiesmighthaveinacinema.ALettertoanarchitectTheHeading(address,date)ThebodyThesignature(name)TheGreetingandyourpurposetowritetheletterSuggestionsPersuadethearchitectagaintotakethesuggestions

AletterofsuggestionPersuadethearchitectinapolitewayIhopeyouwillnotmindmewritingtoask..Iwonderif…Itwouldbehandytohavelifts…SoI’dliketosuggestthat….Perhapstherecouldbe….Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopemysuggestionswill…

Situation:Anarchitect(Mr.Smith)isdesigningasupermarketinyourcommunity,andaboywrotealetterofsuggestiontohim.task1Paraphrase(改寫)

-------theGreetingPartDearMr.Smith,Areyouthearchitecttobuildthesupermarket?Iamwritingtotellyouthedesignisnotok,youmustn’tdesignitforthedisabledlikethat.Soyoushouldlistentomyadvice:DearMr.Smith,Ilearnfromthelocalnewsthatyouarethearchitectwhoistodesignthesupermarket.Iamwritingtoaskyoutoconsidertherightofthedisabledforeasyaccess.Inparticular,Iwouldlikeyoutoconsiderthefollowingthings:Canyougivesomesuggestionstothearchitect,remembertousepoliteforms.DiscussionUsethesuggestionsyoucollecttofinishthispart,thereshouldbeatopicsentenceineachparagraph.

Task2WritingtheSuggestionPart感謝您閱讀我的信，希望您能贊成我的建議。Thankyouforreadingmyletter,Ihopemysuggestionswillmeetwithyourapproval.殘疾人應(yīng)該和健全人有同樣的機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)享受購(gòu)物。Disabledpeopleshouldhavethesameopportunitiesasable-bodiedpeopletoenjoyshopping.如果你采納我的建議，我肯定超市會(huì)吸引更多的顧客，人們會(huì)高度評(píng)價(jià)你的設(shè)計(jì)，Ifyouadoptmysuggestions,Iamsurethesupermarketwillattractmorecustomersandpeoplewillspeakhighlyofyourdesign.Task3TranslatingtheEndingPartHomework

Writealetterofsuggestiontothearchitect.多元化課堂評(píng)價(jià)表

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：A掌握了;B基本掌握;C沒掌握Readingskills

ABC

Newwords

ABCCommunication

ABCWritingskills

ABCParticipationABC不介意我寫信來(lái)問(wèn)…尤其是對(duì)---方便做---有困難在---裝幾套耳機(jī)聽力受損的顧客升起了的座位---更方便電影院的入口得到你的贊成帶著尊嚴(yán)獲取更高的利潤(rùn)notmindmewritingtoask..inparticularbehandytohavetroubledoingsthfitsetsofearphonestohearing-impairedcustomersraisedseatingitismoreconvenientto…theentrancetothecinemameetwithyourapprovalwithdignitymakehigherprofitsphrasesAletterofsuggestion

Aletterofsuggestionnormallyhasfiveparts.

1.TheHeading

Thisincludestheaddress,linebyline,withthelastlinebeingthedate.Skipalineaftertheheading.2.TheGreeting.Thegreetingalwaysendswithacomma.Thegreetingshouldbeformal,beginningwiththeword"dear".3.Thebody.

Itisalsoknownasthemaintext.Generallyspeaking,thebodyincludes

threeparts.Thefirstpart(usuallythefirstparagraph)tellsthereceiverthatyouarewritingthislettertomakesuggestionsonsomething,andthemainparttellsclearlywhatyoursuggestionsare.Thelastpart(usuallythelastparagraph)asksthe

receivertoconsideryoursuggestions.Don’tforgettoencouragethereceivertotakeyoursuggestions.Skipalinebetweenparagraphs,especiallyintypedorprintedcopy,andalsohelpthereader.4.Thecomplimentaryclose.

Thisshortexpressionisalwaysafewwordsonasingleline.Itendswithacomma.Thecomplimentaryclosebeginswithacapitalletterandendswithacomma.5.Thesignatureline.

Typeorprintyourname.Thehandwrittensignaturegoesabovethislineandbelowtheclose.Thesignaturelineandthehandwrittensignatureareindentedtothesamecolumnastheclose.Thesignatureshouldbewritteninblueorblackink.

Skipfromonetothreespaces(twoonatypewriter),andtypeinthesignaturelinetheprintednameofthepersonsigningtheletter.Signthenameinthespacebetweenthecloseandthesignatureline,startingattheleftedgeofthesignatureline.AsampleofaletterofsuggestionMr.XueSunLeiChiefarchitect18HongyangSupermarketdesignYuquanCounty211KangweiRoadYuquanCounty18March,200_

DearMr

Xue,Ilearnfromthelocalnewsthatyouarethe

architectwhoistodesignthesupermarket.Iamwritingtoaskyoutoconsidertherightofthedisabledforeasyaccess.Inparticular,Iwouldlikeyoutoconsiderthefollowingthings:1.Accesstothesupermarketforpeopleinwheelchairsandthosewhohavedifficultywalking.Theliftsshouldbewideenoughforthewheelchairstomovearound.Theentranceshouldbesuitableforwheelchairsonthegroundfloor.Thereshouldbespecialentryforpeoplefortheblind.2.Toilets.

Thereshouldbespecialtoiletsforthedisabled.Thebathroomsandtoiletsshouldhavedoorwayswideenoughforawheelchair,doorsthatareeasytoopenandclose,andhand-holdsthatthedisabledcaneasilyuse.3.

Telephonesshouldbeeasyforapersoninawheelchairtoreach.Generallyspeaking,asupermarketissobigthatitisdifficultforone,especiallyoneinawheelchairtofindwhatoneneeds.Sotelephonesshouldbeeasytoreachforapersoninawheelchairsothathecancallthestaffforhelp.4.Shelves.Whenpeopledesigntheshelves,thedisabledshouldbetakenintoconsideration.Safetyshouldcomefirst.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyou