初中英語(yǔ)中考作文指導(dǎo)(精品)vince.ppt

1、初中英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)課 Lets go for it!,basic structure (基本結(jié)構(gòu)的安排),Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to

2、 remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main

3、 idea, let alone(更不用說(shuō))answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon.,Lets go for it!,Mary,(the beginning),(th

4、e ending),the body（正文）,basic rules (寫作考試規(guī)則),search（審） list（列） add(加: 開頭和結(jié)尾) connect(連) beautiful(美：諺語(yǔ)/例子),牛刀小試,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡

5、議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our

6、report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔、漂亮。,How d

7、o people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who rel

8、ax well work well.,連(connect),Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,方法一:善用詞匯 甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯,Which is better?,他們?cè)诤┥下犚魳?lè)。,A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能幫助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,他們很早就到了。,A The

9、y arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語(yǔ)很有趣。,我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。,A We

10、should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多種句型,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三

11、:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示選擇: or, eitheror 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示條件: if , unless 6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way

12、, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact

13、10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he

14、 went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my favorite sport. I like basketball best because it can help me keep health. I play basketball with my classmates at school twice a

15、week. I make a lot of good friends when I play basketball. And it bring me a lot of happy. Whats more ,it can make me to grow not only taller but also strong. I love play basketball. I hope be a basketball player in the future.,My favorite sport,swimming,fishing,healthy,brings,stronger,to be/ I will

16、 be,happiness,playing,grow,Checklist spelling capitalization (A/a) punctuation (.,?!) subject-verb agreement part of speech (n/v/adj/adv) tense usage of phrases詞組固定搭配(慣用法),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some p

17、eople stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連(connect),美(beautify),We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report

18、. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and e

19、njoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As t

20、he saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.,Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/saying,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處,It is good for us students t

21、o take exercise,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí),We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb

22、/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用

23、后者。,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。,早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。,失敗是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use cryin

24、g over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水難收。,一天一個(gè)蘋果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。,條條大路通羅馬。,活到老，學(xué)到老。,方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth

25、.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,結(jié)尾：提出倡議或號(hào)召,Lets Do it now ! /

26、 Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I cant wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Dont hesitate(猶豫). It will be great fun!,First，some of us arent interested

27、 in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words w

28、e havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說(shuō))answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. H

29、ere is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every mor

30、ning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for it!（試填一填）,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the

31、 teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope wh

32、at I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your turn to go for it!（check）,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The

33、only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days. Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,Its your turn! （ 請(qǐng)分析以下的文章）,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,隨著人口的增多，人類不