三段寫作講義04.ppt

1、5-6.5三段寫作講義04.ppt,Cashion Zhang,Company Logo,Essay Writing 大作文 單邊論1：argumentative (advantage/positive) 20% 單邊論2： persuasive (agree or disagree) =30% 兩邊倒discussion(some people while others) 30% 原因解決論exploratory (why? How?) 10-12% 雜論 (which? What? Do you think?) 10%,Company Logo,07-09真題 見附件1,Company L

2、ogo,Fashion and confidence,Company Logo,Fashion and economy,Company Logo,議論文步驟1提綱 例1： 最近有這樣個現(xiàn)象。（題目改寫）。（主題）我認為這個現(xiàn)象/趨勢/發(fā)展整體上是好的，從（主）消費者（參與者）經(jīng)濟發(fā)展（反方的駁論）生活水平的提高幾個方面來講。 消費者（主）直接受益。A.爽了尤其是被夸的時候。B.約會，開派對。吸引。 另外，經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的到一定促進。消費增長，相關行業(yè)發(fā)展，就業(yè)。好的循環(huán)。（轉折）但是，有些人持相反看法。 反對者認為/有評論說（對方觀點）時尚是奢侈，費錢，不如用來給我買牛肉面。但是，這個觀點忽視了重要

3、的因素。A.老子有錢。B.有a貨，漢正街。 總而言之，好抵消而且多余壞。,Company Logo,Company Logo,思路練習 分組討論07-09真題,Company Logo,基本翻譯 見板書,Company Logo,We are using more products that are transported from other countries. Does the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages?,Company Logo,Imported goods,Company Logo,Relevant indu

4、stries,Company Logo,competition,范文見板書,Company Logo,翻譯的第二層次換句型 首段引入 首段主題句 好處句型 擴展方法 轉折 對方觀點+駁論 尾段,Company Logo,引入： 背景general to specific=原因 講故事anecdote(軼事)=相關 對話conversation=相關 信息startling information =根據(jù)某某調查顯示 例子見板書,Company Logo,主題句： 主動語態(tài)，用我 避免主觀，用被動語態(tài) 避免主觀，也避免因為被動，而被理解為沒用明確觀點 I believe/think This t

5、rend is to be proved generally positive in terms of A, B and C. The discussion on A, B and C will prove the trend generally positive. 如何既不用被動也不用我 答案：用客觀詞做主語,Company Logo,好處 基本句型基本中文：A對B有好處 A helps/ contributes to B. B can benefit from A. B (不是人) can be promoted/ accelerated/ improved/ enhanced/ stre

6、ngthened A has positive effects on/ affects positively B A is good /favorable/ beneficial to B.,Company Logo,2. 原則：最合適的（不見得一定要長，但也可以長） 例子1：Consumers can immediately benefit from the development of fashion industry. 改寫1：In such a highly civilized and marketable era, to wear fashionable clothes has become an essential part of peoples daily life. 改寫2：We need fashion in life and work. 例2：the economy can be promoted to some degree. 改寫1：The development of any industry contributes to national economy to some extent, so does that of fa