中考復(fù)習(xí)書(shū)面表達(dá)(修改).ppt

1、書(shū)面表達(dá)技巧方法,Writing (15 分),書(shū)面表達(dá),一、考試題型,命題作文 提示作文 限制性寫(xiě)作, 給出情景和提示，讓學(xué)生設(shè)想自己處在這樣的情景中該怎么辦 英語(yǔ)和漢語(yǔ)同時(shí)出現(xiàn),一.學(xué)會(huì)審題。確定短文的體裁（一般為 記敘文） 二.根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容，確定所用到的 主要時(shí)態(tài)（多為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，一般過(guò) 去時(shí)態(tài)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)）,2000-2005年書(shū)面表達(dá)題分析,表達(dá)愿望 記敘文 作文/對(duì)話(huà) If I have a lot of money, I will 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 一般將來(lái)時(shí) 2004記難忘的事 記敘文 作文/對(duì)話(huà) Highs and lows in my life 一般過(guò)去時(shí) 2005表達(dá)

2、感情 記敘文 命題作文 Love for my parents 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 一般過(guò)去時(shí),四、中考答題要求 1、 學(xué)生能在所學(xué)詞匯、句型和語(yǔ)法 的范圍內(nèi)寫(xiě)正確的句子，不得少 于60個(gè)詞。 2、要表達(dá)真實(shí)感情 3、對(duì)卷面整潔有一定要求,三.學(xué)會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)換作文題目，將新面臨的題目轉(zhuǎn)換 為自己寫(xiě)過(guò)的熟悉的題目，學(xué)會(huì)發(fā)散思維 列：本次月考題目-My first My first dream- My dream My first journey-A trip to My first teacher-My favorite teacher I hope- My dream,四.寫(xiě)出條理清楚的文章，遵循一定的模式

3、1.用總分- 總 的模式 1）先有引入語(yǔ)，將話(huà)題轉(zhuǎn)到題目上 2）定出主體內(nèi)容 ，分層次清晰的寫(xiě)出文章 可以用：First 第一 second 第二 third 第三 或 At first(首先） Next其次 finally 最后 來(lái)分清文章體系，方便閱卷人批改 3）結(jié)束文章時(shí)一定要再次點(diǎn)到體 2.豐富文章體裁，學(xué)會(huì)使用下列句型：,基本句型模塊,、主語(yǔ)be動(dòng)詞+名詞、形容詞、數(shù)詞（表語(yǔ)） 表示人或事物的身份、特征、形狀等。 I am a teacher. You are students. My brother is tall。 Our classroom is big and bright.

4、 Mr. Brown is sixty .,I am happy/angry/friendly/ sad/sure/sorry/glad/afraid/,2、主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ),We study English hard. Mary likes dancing. Tom has been to Beijing twice. Some foreigners came to our city yesterday.,There is a blackboard on the wall. There isnt any bread on the plate. There are many visitors

5、in the park. There is something wrong with my bike. There is nothing serious with you. 4.Its +adj+to do sth. Its + adj.+for sb.+to do sth.,3、There +be,常用動(dòng)詞模塊,Be,.have,do, go, come ,visit, play, work,study,learn, Run,jump,climb,walk, talk ,hear ,listen, say,speak,tell watch ,read ,look,see write, sit

6、,stand, like ,enjoy,finish, think, want ,hope, wish ,decide, forget, remember，believe，,遇到不難寫(xiě)詞語(yǔ)時(shí)，用簡(jiǎn)單 的同義詞替換 近義詞模塊：Beautiful-nice, good, Wonderful- exciting Delicious-nice,good Difficult - hard Different - not same Interestingfunny,動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)模塊 1、描寫(xiě)人或事物常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) My friend/Our school/ I love my hometown. 2、記敘發(fā)

7、生的事情常用一般過(guò)去時(shí) A happy day/ A diary / A visit to 3、表達(dá)想法和愿望常用一般將來(lái)時(shí) I hope /I want to be ,一些需要注意的細(xì)節(jié)： 1.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用一定要規(guī)范，句號(hào)是黑點(diǎn) 2.標(biāo)題，句首字母大寫(xiě) 3.在無(wú)格子的情況下，為了使書(shū)寫(xiě)更美觀(guān)， 可輕輕用鉛筆畫(huà)橫線(xiàn),七、書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),一擋（13-15分）內(nèi)容切題、層次清楚、語(yǔ)言流暢、基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 二擋（10-12）內(nèi)容切題、層次比較清楚、語(yǔ)言比較流暢、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤較少。 三擋（6-9）內(nèi)容基本切題、層次不夠分明、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)較多錯(cuò)誤。 四擋（1-5）有一定內(nèi)容、但語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤較多。 注意

8、:作文語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤扣分不得超過(guò)2分；單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤扣分不得超過(guò)2分；抄襲卷中閱讀材料的抄襲部分不給分。,八、答題思路與技巧,認(rèn)真審題,常用句子,要求提示,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,英語(yǔ)思維,列出要點(diǎn),常用詞語(yǔ),九、優(yōu)秀范文點(diǎn)評(píng),根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一封約80個(gè)詞的信。 1、提示：收信人姓名：Susan 寫(xiě)信人姓名：Li Ping 2、要求： 請(qǐng)把你的愛(ài)好- 打籃球、玩電腦游戲、交朋友、 看電視、讀書(shū)等及家庭情況向她做一個(gè)介紹。,Dear Susan: How do you do ! My name is Li Ping. Im a Chinese boy. Im fourteen. Im from Kunming, Chin

9、a.Kunming is called “Spring City”,because its neither cold in winter and nor hot in summer. Its a beautiful city. I like playing basketball computer game, making friends,watching TV and reading books. There are three people in my family.,They are my father, my mother and I. My father works in a fact

10、ory. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital.I want to make friends with you . Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Ping (95-20=75),A diary It was blowing hard outside. I went to bed after I finished my homework. Suddenly I remembered that the windows of my classroom were open. Quickly I got up

11、 and put onmy clothes.I ran against the wind to theclassroom in hurry. On the way to school I had many falls.,When I arrived there ,I was too tired to go any farther. I did my best to closed all the windows. Till then there was a smile on my face . After a short rest, I left the classroom happily. (

12、92-26=66).,2005年書(shū)面表達(dá)解析,提示：爸爸媽媽給了你無(wú)限的愛(ài)，你肯定把這 份深情牢記在心。但你是否曾用適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞奖磉_(dá)過(guò)你對(duì)爸爸媽媽的愛(ài)呢？ 要求： 1、根據(jù)所給題目。用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記敘你為爸爸媽媽做過(guò)的一件事，以表達(dá)你對(duì)他們的情感。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)。 2、語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。卷面整潔。文中不得使用真實(shí)人名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。,實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練,An E-mail to Li Hua 提示：Tomorrow is Sunday .Your friend Li Hua invite you to have a pinic with her .But you cant go . 要求：根

13、據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)發(fā)電子郵件告訴她你的想法或打算。,認(rèn)真審題,常用句子,要求提示,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,英語(yǔ)思維,列出要點(diǎn),常用詞語(yǔ),列出要點(diǎn)、詞組、句子。,表示感謝和心情 表示遺憾 說(shuō)明原因 thank you for want to go with sbhave a lot of things to do do my homework wash my clotheswatch TVlisten to the musicgo shopping Be sorry to say be afraidwhat a pity Butbecausefirst secondthird,組句成文、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,Dear Li Hua Thank you for inviting me. I really want to go with you .But I am afraid I cant.Because I have a lot of things to do . First I must finish my homework in the morning.Second I have to wash my c