分類仿寫與點評談書面表達與訓練課件

1、分類仿寫與點評 談書面表達與訓練汝州二高 張占清分類仿寫書面表達的評分標準分五檔： 第五檔次（很好）：（21-25分）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。書寫規(guī)范，完全達到了預期的寫作目的。分類仿寫第四檔（好）（16-20分） 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試復雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。應(yīng)用簡單的語句間

2、的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。書寫比較規(guī)范，達到了預期的寫作目的。分類仿寫根據(jù)每一類書面表達的特點，做分類訓練： 1、人物介紹 2、招聘應(yīng)聘 3、小故事（提綱式作文） 4、通知 5、能源環(huán)保 6、書信 7、人口旅游與交通 8、生活起居 9、利弊討論 10、圖表介紹 11、描述過程 分類仿寫（4）、 look forward to 期待，盼望 We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.（5）、 call for需要，要求 This job calls for patience. People were calling for the freed

3、om of all slaves.（6）、 a variety of多種多樣的 This box contains a variety of toys.分類仿寫（7）、 be fit /suitable for 適合， 勝任。 She is completely fit for the job.分類仿寫3.她盼望著某一天能出國深造。(look forward to) He is looking forward to going abroad for further study.4.貧困地區(qū)目前的形勢要求在教育培訓上有更高的投入。(call for) The situation in the p

4、oor area at present calls for more investment on the education.5.該工程因各種原因而破產(chǎn)。(a variety of) The project broke down for a variety of reasons.6.這些書適合兒童閱讀。(be suitable for) These books are suitable for children.寫作中常用到一些經(jīng)典句型:1.There is an opportunity for you to apply for the job as a secretary of the En

5、glish language. 有機會供你申請英文秘書一職。2.Applicants are required to have a good knowlede of English. 受聘者要求精通英語。3.You will have a starting salary at RMB 1500 per month. 你的起薪每月1500元人民幣。4.I shall be glad to call for an interview at any time. 本人很樂意在任何時候前來面試。5.I am majoring in 本人主修6.I look forward to your call at

6、 74568741 恭候您的電話，我的號碼是74568741。 7.I am confident that my experience and reference will show that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position. 我確信我的經(jīng)歷和證明材料將說明我能滿足貴職位的特殊要求。8.I wish to apply for the post 本人有希望獲得貴單位所提供的職位。熱身訓練 我看了貴公司昨天登在中國日報上的廣告，我覺得我適合貴公司所提供的職位。我今年20歲。身體狀況良好，我擅長于操作電腦和英語口語，

7、我期待著能成為貴公司的一員。評價書面表達的評價 在高考評卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)，學生普遍存在寫作能力較弱的現(xiàn)象。現(xiàn)行高中英語寫作的評價方法主要是，教師抽查批改或全批全改，然后在課堂上講評，這種評價方法往往有弊端。評價1、忽視學生在評價中的主體作用。2、只注重評價寫作結(jié)果，忽視寫作過程。3、評價的手段和方法過于單一。 寫作評價應(yīng)該遵循互動性原則，多元化原則,發(fā)展性原則。評價 Measures have been taken to help people keep away from the harm of smoking. In many cities, smoking is forbidden in pub

8、lic places. The danger of smoking is warned of everywhere. And newspapers are asked not to publish advertisements for cigarettes. World “No Tobacco Day” has been set against smoking. 分析1）段落的開展: topic sentence-supporting sentence(1). It is almost known to all that smoking is bad for peoples health.(2

9、). Still, many people find it difficult to stop smoking.(3). Measures have been taken to help people keep away from the harm of smoking.評價2）精彩佳句(1). One reason is that smoking usually becomes a habit, which is not easy to be given up. (表語從句和非限制性定語從句的應(yīng)用使文章行文簡練，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，句法得當。)(3). Measures have been taken

10、 to help people keep away from the harm of smoking. In many cities, smoking is forbidden in public places. The danger of smoking is warned of everywhere. And newspapers are asked not to publish advertisements for cigarettes. World “No Tobacco Day” has been set against smoking. （比較主動句和被動句在此段應(yīng)用的區(qū)別，被動句

11、強調(diào)事實，句子的感染力和表現(xiàn)力更勝于主動句。）評價3）精彩詞匯 lead to、 die from、 find it difficult for sb to do sth、 give up、 contain、 take measures to do sth、 keep away from、 warn sb of the danger (高級詞匯的使用文章表達更準確)評價4）邏輯過渡: still的使用使文章邏輯清楚、 連貫。備考一、適用于文章開頭的句子1、對比類文章的開頭。 Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people

12、have different opinions. Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. Others, however, think students should not.備考2、應(yīng)用文的開頭。 Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizens duty to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do? What

13、makes the ocean such a great place to live? The answer is water. May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.備考4、圖標類文章的開頭。 From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city. According to a survey made last week. As can be seen from the graph, the number of th

14、e traffic accidents has been growing in recent years.備考二、適用于結(jié)尾的句子。 結(jié)尾一般是對文章的升華或?qū)ξ恼轮黝}的歸納，結(jié)尾要能喚起讀者的共鳴，給人回味，引人深思。結(jié)尾的句子可以表示祝愿、期望或表明自己的觀點。 備考例如： Lets start work now and do what we can to build a harmonious society. We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.備考寫作時，要求學生審好題。（題材、要點、人稱、時態(tài)）要求學生寫作前養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習慣。包括段落、詞、詞組、句型要進行思考取舍，用自己最熟悉的、最有把握的。要抓書寫規(guī)范與卷面干凈、整潔