高中英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)專題課件

1、 短文改錯(cuò)（Correction）1 短文改錯(cuò)（Correction）11. 看不出句子有錯(cuò)，感覺越讀越對(duì)。2. 看得出句子錯(cuò)誤, 但無(wú)法改正。 Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?21. 看不出句子有錯(cuò)，感覺越讀越對(duì)。 Whats the 1“規(guī)范性”原則：要嚴(yán)格按照示范規(guī)定的符號(hào)改錯(cuò)。要記住“”、“”、“”分別表示錯(cuò)詞糾正、缺詞填補(bǔ)、多詞刪除。切忌用文字說(shuō)明或用箭頭表示。 2“四不改”原則：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫不改；大小寫不改；詞序錯(cuò)誤不改(應(yīng)從錯(cuò)詞或少詞方面考慮)；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。 3“五改動(dòng)”原則：忠實(shí)于原文原則(不可改變?cè)牡脑?/p>

2、意)；一對(duì)一原則(一錯(cuò)一詞)；錯(cuò)誤以改動(dòng)最少為原則；虛詞以添加或者刪除為原則；實(shí)詞以改變形式為原則。31“規(guī)范性”原則：要嚴(yán)格按照示范規(guī)定的符號(hào)改錯(cuò)。要記住“應(yīng)試原則改變形式以 “實(shí)詞”居多添刪以 “虛詞”居多多“改正”少“添刪”改后要保持原意不變小心局部通順陷阱Dont forget!4應(yīng)試原則改變形式以 “實(shí)詞”居多Dont forget!Step1:Discussion (group work)短文改錯(cuò)賓語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞不定代詞謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞冠詞名詞單復(fù)數(shù)介詞非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形容詞、副詞代詞并列連詞5Step1:Discussion (group work)短Step2: 短文改錯(cuò)題命題特點(diǎn)1. 短文內(nèi)

3、容：與學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)或生活密切相關(guān)，以書信居多。2. 短文長(zhǎng)度：約100個(gè)詞，不少于95詞，也不多于110詞。3. 錯(cuò)誤設(shè)置：每個(gè)句子最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤，即有的句子無(wú)錯(cuò)，有的句子只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，有的句子有兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤。注意：一句不會(huì)出現(xiàn)三處錯(cuò)誤。6Step2: 短文改錯(cuò)題命題特點(diǎn)1. 短文內(nèi)容：與學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)4. 錯(cuò)誤類型：1處多詞；1處少詞；8處錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞，即多詞、少詞和錯(cuò)詞的比例是1:1:8。 多一個(gè)詞，要求考生刪除的通常是：冠詞、介詞、連詞、不定式符號(hào)、助動(dòng)詞。 少一個(gè)詞，要求考生添加的通常是：冠詞、介詞、連詞、不定式符號(hào)、物主代詞。 錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞，要求考生改正。74. 錯(cuò)誤類型：1處多詞；1處少詞；8處錯(cuò)一

4、個(gè)詞，即多詞、少Step3：改錯(cuò)題解題原則及步驟總原則：改動(dòng)以最少為原則; 虛詞以添加或刪除為原則; 實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則；以保持句子原意為原則。步驟：通讀全文，掌握大意;整句分析，逐行推敲;反復(fù)通讀，復(fù)查驗(yàn)證。8Step3：改錯(cuò)題解題原則及步驟總原則：81.語(yǔ)意矛盾：andbut comego luckilyunluckily herethere unless-if；1. Unfortunately, the Twins Towers were destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them

5、by myself. 2. More than 1000 paintings will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. 3. I am here in Beijing, and I do wish you could go to visit China.4. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to somebody e

6、lse.一、邏輯關(guān)系錯(cuò)誤orandcomebut91.語(yǔ)意矛盾：andbut comego luc2.語(yǔ)意重復(fù)：becauseso; though-but; repeat-again; improve-better; Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. 1. 錯(cuò)誤搭配：enter into; marry with; in last week; all what;

7、 the place where he lives in; the girl whom he works with her; 主系表+to do it. The teacher entered into the classroom, followed by some students.She married with a lawyer in last year. 二、習(xí)慣搭配錯(cuò)誤102.語(yǔ)意重復(fù)：becauseso; though-bu2. 固定搭配：give up; stay up; give in; be filled with; tooto; so/suchthat; whetheror

8、 not;hardlywhen; no soonerthan；agree with；enjoyoneself等Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. They quarreled as they could not agree each other.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake lis

9、tening music. withwithtoto112. 固定搭配：give up; stay up; give當(dāng)堂導(dǎo)練一：1. I like dancing, my brother likes playing basketball.2. Last week, she visited the places where she lives in many years ago. 3. Unless you lose heart, youll fail. 4. He wrote to me immediately as soon as he got there.5. Though it was

10、cold, but he went out.6. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe. and/butIf12當(dāng)堂導(dǎo)練一：and/butIf121. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)用錯(cuò)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞的混用：They take him lots of good book and fresh fruit.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.2. 動(dòng)詞：時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤；及物動(dòng)詞后無(wú)

11、賓語(yǔ)；不及物動(dòng)詞后多了賓語(yǔ)；需要接ing形式的接了to等：We must found ways to protect our environment.I had been looking forward to go there for a long time.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited for a long time and buy three tickets. booksfindair三、詞法錯(cuò)誤goingstandingbought131. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)用錯(cuò)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)

12、名詞的混用：booksfi3. 形容詞副詞：常出現(xiàn)需形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反；原級(jí)、比較級(jí)、最高級(jí)的錯(cuò)用：Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.The fish has gone bad. It tastes terribly. He has a comfortable room，patiently nurses，and a great deal of time

13、 to read.This dancer is much more younger than that one.seriousUnfortunatelyterriblepatient143. 形容詞副詞：常出現(xiàn)需形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反；原級(jí)、4.介詞：主要是介詞的多余或缺失，錯(cuò)用(多為固定搭配)：Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. With the help by our fathe

14、r, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. We have more time with after-school activities.withinoffor154.介詞：主要是介詞的多余或缺失，錯(cuò)用(多為固定搭配)：wi5.主謂一致性：第三人稱單數(shù)漏掉s，或主語(yǔ)為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了單數(shù)；再就是就近原則對(duì)主語(yǔ)的影響。It is one of the modern city in the world.He is the only one of those students who have been t

15、o America.The old man along with his three children are fishing by the lake . citieshasis165.主謂一致性：第三人稱單數(shù)漏掉s，或主語(yǔ)為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用6. 冠詞：定冠詞the的多余或缺失，如季節(jié)，月份，星期，球類及三餐活動(dòng)，稱呼頭銜前等不能加the; same等常和the一起使用；a， an不能混用，特別注意：hour， honest等雖然首字母不是元音字母，但其發(fā)音卻是以元音素開頭，故用an，而useful， university， European， onehour等雖然首字母是元音字母，但卻以輔音

16、音素開頭，故用a。1. He was admitted to an university last year. 2. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.3. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. atheaan176. 冠詞：定冠

17、詞the的多余或缺失，如季節(jié)，月份，星期，球7. 數(shù)詞：主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用，如分?jǐn)?shù)的分子大于一時(shí)分母沒有用復(fù)數(shù)等，基數(shù)詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式如幾百hundreds of，幾千thousands of漏掉了s，或是當(dāng)其前有具體數(shù)字或several時(shí)加了復(fù)數(shù)，如seven hundred，寫作seven hundreds。Some people prefer hard seats to soft one.Hundred of students go to visit the place every year.Three thousands students went to study abro

18、ad this year.onesHundredsthousand187. 數(shù)詞：主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用，如分?jǐn)?shù)的分子大8. 代詞：1）代詞的性、數(shù)、格的錯(cuò)用，2）形容詞性、名詞性物主代詞；3）關(guān)系代詞，“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”結(jié)構(gòu)。The factory has been moved out of the city，and a sports center has been built in their place. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle，that was only one hundred yuan.The Smiths did his b

19、est to make me feel at home.itstheirwhich198. 代詞：1）代詞的性、數(shù)、格的錯(cuò)用，2）形容詞性、名詞性Step5: 當(dāng)堂導(dǎo)練1.I am wondering how to do tomorrow. 2.He said that he is writing a new novel.3.Our task has finished so far. 4.Different people speak different language. 5.Tom book is on the desk. 6.What he needs are money. 7.What

20、he wants is three books. 8.It was the first time that Amy has seen such a beautiful painting.8.In a fact he has three sons. wasbeenlanguagesTomsisarewhathad20Step5: 當(dāng)堂導(dǎo)練1.I am wondering ho動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)；冠介連代分清楚；還要注意形和副；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞細(xì)領(lǐng)悟；習(xí)慣用法要記??；句子成分多分析，邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注。21動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)；21短篇練習(xí)22短篇練習(xí)22 At Christmas Eve, Jim went wit

21、h his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. A sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shining brightl