讀后續(xù)寫Christmas-gift-課件-2023屆高三英語二輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫Requirements:1.詞數＞150words(各段空出不得超過一行)；2.注意兩段首句的提示詞，注意4大銜接處；3.情景和諧，主題明確，使用＞5高級句式。4.字跡清楚，干凈，美觀。1ItwasacoldDecember,atthetailendoftheGreatDepression,andthingsweretough.Mumhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherowninoursmallcommunity.wereliedonsocialassistancetokeepusclothed,andalthoughourclothesweresecondhand,wethoughttheywerebeautiful.2Lookingback,IrealizedwhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuck(塞)anewpieceofcardboardinourshoesbecauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,MumwouldhaveFrenchtoastreadyforus.Ourrentwas$25amonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldmoveoutrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary.3Theholidayswerefastapproaching,andwewereentitledto(有資格獲得)$25forChristmasfromsocialservices.ItwasfourdaysbeforeChristmas.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewasgoingtousethemoneytopayourbackrent.Thatwaywe’dhavearoofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ThenshetoldusthattherewouldbenoChristmasgifts.4WhatMomdidn’tknowwasthatIhadbeensellingChristmastrees,sweepingsnowanddoingpart-timejobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots—bootsthatweren’tpatched(縫補);bootswithnocardboardinit.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inch,Top-Genuine,PierreParisboots,andtheycost$23.5ThebigdayforgettingmybootscameonChristmasEveafternoon.IwasveryexcitedasIhurrieduptheshoppingcenterforit.Ontheway,Inoticedagrocerystore(雜貨店).6

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace..7

Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor..Paras.1-2background——poorParas.3-4conflict/problem——boots?v.schristmaslightsanddecorations?Paras.5-6-7WhatdidIdoonChristmasEveafternoon?—buywhat?why?problem?solution!theme!plot情節(jié)Paragraph1:

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporch(門廊；門廳)andknockedonthedoor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Scene3:WhatdecisiondidImake?Scene1:WhatdidIsee?Scene2:HowdidIfeelatthattime?Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandaction

Scene2:

seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandaction

Scene3:aninteractionbetweenmumandme——morallessonScene1:？Paragraph1:

Suddenly,apaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor’seye._____________________________Scene1:Taylor’reaction(beforedrawing)句型1（通用版）：

S＋V＋O,

,

.1.非謂語

（-ing/-ed）2.獨立主格

（n.＋-ing/-ed/-todo/adj./adv./介詞短語）3.with＋O＋OC賓補（-ing/-ed/-todo/adj./adv./介詞短語）4.so...that/asif...;like/as...as...5.adj.＋adj.＊Delightedandthrilled,“That’sit,”sheexclaimed,

(with)hereyestwinklingwithexcitement,

soexcitedasifshewerefloatingintheoceanofhappiness.＊“That’sit,”sheexclaimed,

hereyestwinklingwithexcitement,soexcitedasifshewerefloatingintheoceanofhappiness.Language語言Paragraph1TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene1WhatdidIsee?+WhatdidIrealize?看到某物的句式1：倒裝（表方位的副詞短語位于句首倒裝）回顧：Inthechairwassittingmybosswithaserious/cold/hardenedface,gazingatmelongandhard.雜貨店里各種各樣的生活必需品琳瑯滿目，吸引著我走進去。1.1.1:Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.看到某物的句式2：sbwasgreetedbyasceneof+n./Whatgreetedsb.wasasceneof+n.,——當我走進去的時候，映入我眼簾的是一片令人眼花繚亂的景象——各種各樣的必需品令人著迷地陳列著1.1.2:WhenIsteppedinside,Iwasgreetedbyasceneofbedazzlement眼花繚亂——differentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayedfascinatingly迷人的.dazzlinglyadv.耀眼地，炫目地；令人贊嘆地意識到什么句式3：強調句就在那時，我意識到在我們昏暗的房子里，我們沒有燈，沒有裝飾品，也沒有錢過圣誕節(jié)。1.2:ItwasthenthatIrealizedinourdimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Scene2

HowdidIfeelatthattime?一種奇怪的負罪感突然吞沒了我2.1.1：Astrangesenseofguiltsuddenlyengulfed吞沒；淹沒me.內疚和不安像波浪一樣涌向我，強烈到我忍不住問自己是否應該買這雙靴子。2.1.2：Anupsurgeofguiltandrestlessnesswashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthatIcouldn’thelpaskingmyselfifIshouldbuytheboots.我被內疚所籠罩，內心掙扎，猶豫了很久。2.1.3：Seized/Overwhelmedbyguilt,Istruggledwithinmyself,hesitatingalot.TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.情感的掙扎：

我腦子里還想著皮埃爾·巴黎的靴子，我試圖說服自己，至少我們還有錢付欠下的房租。2.2.1：WithPierreParisbootsstillinmymind,Itriedtoconvincemyselfthat

wehavemoneytopayourbackrentatleast.然而，家人在那個寒冷的圣誕節(jié)失望的表情一直清晰地縈繞在我的腦海里。2.3:However,myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingering繼續(xù)存留/徘徊inmymind

clearly.回顧句式4：Havingspottednothingbutswayingtrees,Alanwasalmostonthevergeofgivingupwhen_______________.在說服自己今晚至少會有法式吐司的時候，就在我快要離開的時候，家人在那個寒冷的圣誕節(jié)失望的表情依然清晰地縈繞在我的腦海里。2.2.2:HavingconvincedmyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight,Iwasalmostonthevergeofleavingwhen

myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene3

WhatdecisiondidImake?似乎過了一個世紀，我終于下定了決心，眼睛里充滿了決心。3.1:Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolution下定決心

，eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.我買了一只火雞、火腿、橘子和所有的圣誕裝飾品。我花光了辛辛苦苦掙來的每一分錢，回到了家里。3.2.1:Iboughtaturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.Ispenteverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneyandwentbacktomyhouse.TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.Scene3

WhatdecisiondidImake?回顧句式5：UnawareofAlan’spresence,itjumpedhereandthere,enjoyingitselftothefullestasifitwasitsownbackyard.我沒有意識到時間在流逝，而是專注于購買我的家人真正需要的東西，把我辛苦賺來的每一分錢都花得淋漓盡致。買完最后一件東西后，我終于走出了商店，手里滿滿當當——一只火雞、火腿、橘子和所有的圣誕裝飾品。3.2.2:

Unawareof

timetickingaway,Iwasabsorbedinbuyingwhatmyfamilyreallyneeded,spendingeverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneytothefullest.

Afterthelastitemwaspurchased,Ieventuallysteppedoutofthestore,withmyhandsfull——aturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.下水作文：Para.1

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.

Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdispalyeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.

ItwasthenthatIrealizedinour

dimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Anupsurgeofguiltandrestlessnesswashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthat

Icouldn’thelpaskingmyselfifIshouldbuytheboots.Having

convincedmyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight,Iwasalmostonthevergeof

leaving

when

myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolutionandsteppedintothegrocery

store,eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.

Unawareoftimetickingaway,Iwasabsorbedinbuyingwhatmyfamilyreallyneeded,spendingeverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneytothefullest.

Afterthelastitemwaspurchased,Ieventuallysteppedoutofthestore,withmyhandsfull——aturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.para2:Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.

Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandactionScene2:seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandactionScene3:aninteractionbetweenmumandmeScene4:amorallessonpara2:Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Scene1:waitingoutside---myfeelingsandaction

1.心跳加速，我渴望的等待，眼睛盯著門。1-1.Heartflippingimmensely,Iwaitedanxiously,withmyeyesfixedonthedoor.一陣激動的情緒如潮水般向我涌來，如此強烈以至于我不自覺的露出燦爛的笑容。1-2.Anupsurgeofexcitementwashedovermeinwaves,sostrongthatIbrokeintoaradiantgrinunconsciously.3.寒風吹打著（whip)）我的臉，我渴望的等待，我的拳頭緊緊地握著(clench).1-3.Chillywindswhippingmyface,Iwaitedanxiously,myfistsclenchedtightly.

過渡句：我瘦弱的母親出來了。她一打開門，雜貨就掉進去了。句式6表方位的副詞位于句首倒裝Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Scene2:seeingthegroceries,mum’sfeelingsandaction(surprise/curious)盯著這些東西（item）她目瞪口呆(dumbfounded).2-1-1.Staringhardattheseitems,shewasdumbfounded.眼睛因好奇而閃閃發(fā)光,她盯著這些東西，然后向我投來困惑的目光2-1-2.Eyessparklingwithcuriosity,shestaredhardattheseitemsandthencastaconfusedlookonme.Scene3:theinteractionbetweenmumandme眼淚幾乎要溢出我的眼睛，我叫出來（holler）,圣誕快樂，媽媽，真的有圣誕老人TherereallyisaSantaClaus!有點驕傲，我毫無保留的講了我的挫折與坎坷，思緒回到了那些場景--賣圣誕樹和掃雪，在那里我努力工作，pushed我的身體到極限.3-1-1.Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Alittleproud/withalumpinmythroat,Iunfoldedmytwistsandturns,thoughtsflashingbacktoscenes---sellingChristmastreesandsweepingsnow,whereIendeavoredtoworkandpushedmybodytoitslimits.Scene3:theinteractionbetweenmumandme語言看起來沒能表達她的情感以至于她緊緊地擁抱我。3-2-1.Wordsseemedtofailtoconveyheremotionssothatsheembracedmetightly.母親吞了喉嚨里的一塊腫塊，給了我一個巨大擁抱，她臉上掠過一絲微笑。3-2-2.Mumswallowedaswellinglumpinherthroatandgavemeanenormoushug,afaintsmilecrossingherface.

過渡句：歡樂和溫暖的氣氛籠罩著房間。我打賭我永遠不會有這樣的滿足感如果我那時買了這雙PierreParisboots。Anairofjoyandwarmthenvelopedtheroom.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.Scene4:amorallesson那個圣誕節(jié)，我學會了感恩，因為這23美元，因為我媽媽為她家庭的毫不保留的愛，因為我對幸福不停止的幸福的追求。4-1.ThatChristmas,Ilearnedtobegrateful,forthe$23,formum’sunreservedloveforherfamily,andformyunstoppablepursuitofhappiness.那個圣誕節(jié)見證我的成長和我的轉變，從一個自私的男孩到一個有愛和責任心的男人。4-2.ThatChristmaswitnessedmygrowthandtransformation—fromaselfishboytoamanwithloveandresponsibility.那個晚上，我，一個十一歲的男孩，創(chuàng)造了這個最珍貴的圣誕禮物---我的責任心和對家庭的滿足。4-3.Thatnight,I,aneleven-year-oldboy,receivedthemostpreciousChristmasgift—myresponsibilityandsatisfactionformyfamily.下水作文：Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Heartflippingimmensely,Iwaitedanxiously,withmyeyesfixedonthedoor.Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Eyessparklingwithcuriosity,shestaredhardattheseitemsandthencastaconfusedlookonme.Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Alittleproud,Iunfoldedmytwistsandturns,thoughtsflashingbacktoscenes---sellingChristmastreesandsweepingsnow,whereIendeavoredtoworkandpushedmybodytoitslimits.Mumswallowedaswellinglumpinherthroatandgavemeanenormoushug,afaintsmilecrossingherface.Anairofjoyandwarmthenvelopedtheroom.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.ThatChristmaswitnessedmygrowthandtransformation—fromaselfishboytoamanwithloveandresponsibility.

Possibleversion:Para.1

TheChristmaslightsanddecorationsheldme,andIslowedmypace.ItwasthenthatIrealizedinour

dimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.Astrangesenseofguiltsuddenly

engulfedme.WithPierreParisbootsstillinmymind,ItriedtoconvincemyselftherewasatleastFrench

toasttonight.However,myfamily’disappointedfacesonthatcoldChristmaskeptlingeringinmymind

clearly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iultimatelymadetheresolutionandsteppedintothegrocery

store,eyesbrimmingwithdetermination.Iboughtaturkey,ham,orangesandalltheChristmasdecorations.Ispenteverydimeofmyhard-earnedmoneyandwentbacktomyhouse.Possibleversion:Para.2Oncehome,Ipiledthegroceriesontheporchandknockedonthedoor.Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.Staringhardattheseitems,shewasdumbfounded.

Tearsthreateningtospillovermyeyes,Ihollered,“MerryChristmas,Mother!TherereallyisaSantaClaus!”Wordsseemedtofailtoconveyheremotionssothatsheembracedmetightly.Itwaswhenahalf-choking“Thanks”escapedfromhermouththatasenseofachievementsurgedthroughme.IbetIwouldneverhavehadsuchsatisfactionifIhadboughtthePierreParisbootsthen.Ihadalotofexplainingtodoasweunpackedallthefood.Thatnight,I,aneleven-year-oldboy,receivedthemostpreciousChristmasgift—myresponsibilityandsatisfactionformyfamily.

主干句式的豐富性：句式1：倒裝（表方位的副詞短語位于句首倒裝）e.g.:1.Inthechairwassittingmybosswithaserious/cold/hardenedface,gazingatmelongandhard.2.雜貨店里各種各樣的生活必需品琳瑯滿目，吸引著我走進去。Inthegrocerystoreweredifferentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayeddazzlingly,appealingtometostepinside.3.我瘦弱的母親出來了。她一打開門，雜貨就掉進去了。Outcamemythinmom.Theinstantsheunlockedthedoor,thegroceriesfellinside.4.農村人自由自在的日子已經過去了。Gonearethedayswhentheycoulddowhattheylikedtodointhecountry.5.Hardly

had

mom

unlockedthedoor

when

thegroceriesfellinside.主干句式的豐富性：看到某物的句式2：sbwasgreetedbyasceneof+n./Whatgreetedsb.wasasceneof+n.,——當我走進去的時候，映入我眼簾的是一片令人眼花繚亂的景象——各種各樣的必需品令人著迷地陳列著。WhenIsteppedinside,Iwasgreetedbyasceneofbedazzlement眼花繚亂——differentsortsofnecessitiesdisplayedfascinatingly迷人的.意識到什么句式3：強調句就在那時，我意識到在我們昏暗的房子里，我們沒有燈，沒有裝飾品，也沒有錢過圣誕節(jié)。ItwasthenthatIrealizedinourdimhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorationsandnomoneyforChristmas.ItwaswhenIspottedthegroceriesthatIrealiz