四六級作文講座.ppt

1、四六級作文,Content: everything needed included (內(nèi)容要全) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的開頭結(jié)尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準(zhǔn)確運用和句式的富于變

2、化),四六級作文,段落 句子 詞語與詞組,段落,主題句 topic sentence( 首中尾） 擴展句 support sentence （起解釋說明作用，examples/evidence/ argument) 結(jié)尾句 conclusion sentence,論述性文體寫作模板,On the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala,第一段：引言段,There is no consensus of opinions among people as to _（爭論的焦點）. Some people believe that _（觀點

3、1），while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that _（觀點2）.,對于_，眾說紛紜，莫衷一是。有些人認(rèn)為_，對于此，很多人則持相反的觀點，他們認(rèn)為_.,第二段 ：正方觀點,Those people who maintain _（觀點1）hold that _（論據(jù)1）。They also claim that _（論據(jù)2）。,主張_的人認(rèn)為_. 他們覺得_.,第三段：反方觀點,Nevertheless, the other people who contend _（觀點2）argue that _（論據(jù)1）.They a

4、lso point out that_（論據(jù)2）.,然而，主張_的人則認(rèn)為_.他們指出，_.,第四段：總結(jié),A: 單方面-As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, _（論據(jù)1）. For another，_（論據(jù)2）. When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that _(您的觀點）.,在我看來，前一種/后一種觀點更為合理/恰當(dāng)些。其一，_;再者，_。權(quán)衡

5、所有的因素，我們不難得出如下結(jié)論：_.,總結(jié)（2）,B: 權(quán)衡型（中立型）-From the above discussion, I have to admit that there are merits to both sides of the issue. However, I would like to take a more neutral position. On the one hand, _（針對觀點1立場或相關(guān)措施及建議）; on the other hand，_（針對觀點2立場或相關(guān)措施及建議）.,縱觀以上兩種說法，本人認(rèn)為，兩種觀點都有其可取之處。然而，對于此，本人保持中立

6、態(tài)度：一方面，_；另一方面，_.,Linking words in your writing: 遞進: then, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition, whats more, apart from 轉(zhuǎn)折: however, but, although, though, yet, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, whereas, while, otherwise. 總結(jié): finally, at last, in brief, in short, in summary, in conclusion

7、, in a word, to sum up, to summarize, all in all. 強調(diào): indeed, certainly, surely, above all. 對比: in the same way, similarly, just as, unlike, different from. 因果: because (of), as a result of, owing to, thanks to, result from, lie inconsequently, therefore, hence, thus, for this reason, as a result, r

8、esult in, lead to,議論文 說明文 記敘文 應(yīng)用文（書信） 圖表作文（說明文+議論文）,句子,Types of sentences There are four traditional sentence patterns, namely, simple sentence, compound sentence, complex sentence and compound-complex sentence.,The simple sentence A simple sentence has a single subject-verb combination. The girl is

9、 watching TV.,The compound sentence A compound sentence consists of two or more simple sentences, usually connected by a comma plus a joining word (and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet). A compound sentence is used when you want to give equal weight to closely related ideas. Jane works for the government

10、, and her husband runs his own business.,The complex sentence A complex sentence is made up of a simple sentence and a statement that begins with a dependent word. A complex sentence is used when you want to emphasize one idea over another in a sentence. Because I forgot the time, I missed the train

11、.,The compound-complex sentence A compound-complex sentence consists of two (or more) simple sentences and one (or more) dependent statements. When the power line snapped, Mary was watching TV, and Jack was listening to the stereo.,常見錯句,1.句子不完整 誤：The output of the factory increasing steadily. 正：The

12、output of the factory is increasing steadily.,2.呼應(yīng)方面 誤：In high school we worked more as a group than as an individual. 正：In high school we worded more as a group than as individuals.,3.平行結(jié)構(gòu) 誤：Many people carry not only credit cards but also they carry cash. 正：Many people carry not only credit cards

13、but also cash. The price of milk is higher than grain. The price of milk is higher than that of grain.,4. 連詞方面 The reason he was late was because he met a friend on the way. The reason he was late was that he met a friend on the way./ He was late because he met a friend on the way.,Avoid Chinglish!

14、1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) During the trip, you may happen a traffic accident. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if you are convenient. 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) This year will produce more steel than last year.,Language,Corrected 1) Traffic in Shanghai is to

15、o heavy. 2) During the trip, a traffic accident may happen. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if it is convenient for/to you. 4) I left my dictionary at home. 5) This year the factory will produce more steel than last year.,Language,Polish our sentences!,O: The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. P: Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying. O: I like reading and my b