2020年高考滿分作文解析及寫作素材預(yù)測

1、1 / 262020 年高考滿分作文解析及寫作素材預(yù)測熱點話題解讀：熱點話題和社會主要涉及與人的生活及社會發(fā)展方面的潮流趨勢以及影響巨大的突發(fā)事件。潮流趨勢往往是社會發(fā)展的必然，然而在其發(fā)展過程中必然會引起一些爭論，所以此類話題一般會要求考生：從現(xiàn)象入手，分析其成因，優(yōu)點與不足自己的觀點或提出建議?？忌趯懘祟愇恼聲r，應(yīng)該對文章有很強的整體把握能力和分析問題解決問題的能力， 同時合理調(diào)動和利用在生活中所積累的有關(guān)知識提出有建設(shè)性的意見。作文包含四個部分：現(xiàn)象成因優(yōu)缺點觀點。各個環(huán)節(jié)之間要注意邏輯，銜接和應(yīng)用恰當?shù)倪^渡句。 、命題者可能從以下角度出題：1. traffic and protect

2、ing environment(交通與環(huán)保 )；2. the popular science knowledge and science technology(科普知識與科學技術(shù)) ；3. reduce pressure(減壓) ；4. shopping(購物) 人們的生活節(jié)奏越來越快，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為了大眾生活中不可缺少的一部分；5. travelling(旅游) 現(xiàn)代人的生活壓力都很大，所以人們喜歡通過旅游來緩解壓力；6. network(網(wǎng)絡(luò)) 現(xiàn)在很多，讓學生正反兩個方面談?wù)撘幌略跇I(yè)余時間該不該上網(wǎng)，并說出原因；2 / 267. safety awareness（安全意識）為了進一步增

3、強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力；8. save food and eat healthily(節(jié)約食物與健康飲食 ) 目前，我國政府號召全民“拒絕浪費，文明用餐”；9. nature(自然) 在我們身邊，經(jīng)常有自然災(zāi)害發(fā)生。素材積累：一、話題常用單詞1. brand品牌2. economy 經(jīng)濟3. democracy 民主4. hurricane颶風5. earthquake地震6. flood洪水7. typhoon臺風8. volcano火山9. afford 負擔得起10. subprime crisis次貸危機11. apply申請12. fashion時尚13. in deb

4、t欠債14. cash wireless無線3 / 2615. household appliance家用電器16. surf the internet上網(wǎng)17. achievements of china中國的成就18. natural disaster自然災(zāi)害19. flu (influenza)流感20. financial crisis經(jīng)濟危機21. credit card信用卡22. beijing olympics北京奧運會23. it (information technology )信息科技24. pollution污染25. global warming全球變暖26. kor

5、ean wave/trend韓流27. private cars私家車28. tv shopping電視購物29. influence影響30. the reform and opening-up policy改革開放政策二、話題常用短語1.express service快遞服務(wù)2. online payment網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付3. scientific invention科學發(fā)明4. double-edged sword雙刃劍5. energy crisis能源危機4 / 266. unprecedented前所未有的7. aggravate使惡化8. technical innovation科技創(chuàng)

6、新9. antithetical與背道而馳的10. exhaust gas廢氣11. potential hazards潛在危險12. scientific exploration科學探索13. milestone里程碑14. speedy and comfortable快捷舒適15.convenient and efficient方便快捷16. promote relative industries促進相關(guān)產(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展17. a sense of national pride民族自豪感18. pose a threat to對 有威脅19. collect / impose / levy tax

7、 增稅20. means of transportation交通手段21. environment-friendly resources 環(huán)保資源22.green energy環(huán)保能源23. human civilization人類文明24.mainstream culture主流文化25. local customs and practices風土人情26. carry forward 繼承，發(fā)揚 27. artistic reflection藝術(shù)反映5 / 2628. artistic standards藝術(shù)水準29. cultural diversity文化多元化30. place of

8、 interest名勝31. spiritual civilization精神文明32. national identity and value民族特性和價值觀33. be closely interrelated with與有密切關(guān)系34. cross-cultural communication跨文化交流35. achievements of art藝術(shù)成就36. preserve the cultural relics保護文化遺產(chǎn)37.settle down effective laws制定出積極有效的法律38. impose restrictions on 對實施限制39. popul

9、arization of cars汽車普及40. observe (break) traffic regulations遵守 ( 違反) 交通規(guī)則41. get stuck in traffic遇上堵車（get stuck in a traffic jam）42. rush hour上下班高峰時段43. ease the traffic pressure緩解交通壓力44. pedestrian行人45. pavement 人行道46. zebra crossing斑馬線47. overspeed超速行駛48. speed limits限速49. make full use of 充分利用6 /

10、 2650. road networks公路網(wǎng)51. bottleneck瓶頸52. automobile industry汽車工業(yè)53. pollution-free fuel無污染燃料54. pay a heavy price付出慘痛的代價55. settle down effective laws 制定出積極有效的法律56. enhance the quality of life提高生活質(zhì)量57. make rapid progress取得快速的進步58. see dramatic breakthroughs取得突破性進展59. give a great push to the econ

11、omic growth促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展60. earth-shaking changes翻天覆地的改變61. pave the way for the future development 為未來的發(fā)展鋪平道路62. lay a solid foundation for為打下堅實的基礎(chǔ)63. depletion of resources能源消耗64. boost / promote the economic development極大地推動了經(jīng)濟發(fā)展65. make people s life easier (more convenient) 使人們生活更便捷三、參考語句話題常用句型1. prop

12、er measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.應(yīng)該采取適當?shù)拇胧┫拗仆鈬糜握叩臄?shù)量，努力保護當?shù)丨h(huán)境和歷史不受國際旅游業(yè)的不利影響。7 / 262 an increasing number of experts believe that migrants

13、will exert positive effects on construction of city. 越來越多的專家相信移民對城市的建設(shè)起到積極作用。3.however, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and drug.然而，越來越多的城市居民卻懷疑這種說法，他們抱怨民工給城市帶來了許多嚴重的問題，像犯罪和吸毒。4. many c

14、ity residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.許多市民抱怨城市的公交車太少，以至于他們要花很長時間等一輛公交車，而車上可能已滿載乘客。5. there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious pro

15、blem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.無可否認，空氣污染是一個極其嚴重的問題：城市當局應(yīng)該采取有力措施來解決它。6. an investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.一項調(diào)查顯示婦女歡迎退休。7. according to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases

16、linked to smoking.依照最近的一項調(diào)查，每年有4 000 000 人死于與吸煙有關(guān)的疾病。8. any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.任何政府忽視這一點都將付出巨大的代價。8 / 269. in view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.考慮到問題的嚴重性，在事態(tài)進一步惡化之前，必須采取有效的措施。10. it is indi

17、sputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.無可爭辯，現(xiàn)在有成千上萬的人仍過著挨餓受凍的痛苦生活。11. in the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.在過去的幾十年，先進的醫(yī)療技術(shù)已經(jīng)使得人們

18、比過去活得時間更長成為可能。12. in fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.事實上，我們必須承認生命的質(zhì)量和生命本身一樣重要。13. this is a matter of life and deatha matter no country can afford to ignore.這是一個關(guān)系到生死的問題，任何國家都不能忽視。14. this view is now being questioned by more and more people.這一

19、觀點正受到越來越多的人的質(zhì)疑。15. environmental experts point out that the increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.環(huán)境學家指出：持續(xù)增加的污染不僅會導(dǎo)致像全球變暖這樣嚴重的問題，而且還將威脅到人類在這個星球的生存。16. despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not

20、 without its problem. 盡管自行車有許多明顯的優(yōu)點，它仍然存在一些問題。9 / 2617. from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.通過以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論：自行車的優(yōu)點遠大于缺點，并且在現(xiàn)代社會它仍將發(fā)揮重要作用。18. these days

21、, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. 現(xiàn)在，越來越多的人們開始抱怨工作比以前更有壓力。19.many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.許多專家指出這是現(xiàn)代社會發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果，無法避免

22、。20. no invention has received more praise and abuse than internet.沒有一項發(fā)明像互聯(lián)網(wǎng)一樣同時受到如此多的贊揚和批評。真題演練：【例 01】（2018 年北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學生，帶領(lǐng)他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。10 / 26( 請務(wù)必將作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)) _ 【思路點撥】本文為圖片介紹類作文， 這類作文是根據(jù)給出的一幅或幾幅圖畫所提供的信息寫短文。此類題的體裁較廣泛，可以是記敘文、說明文，也可以是議論文。按照本文的

23、要求可知，是寫一篇記敘文。1. 認真讀圖，把握中心。根據(jù)提示可知，內(nèi)容是帶領(lǐng)外國學生體驗中國茶文化的全過程，介紹了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的過程，所以這是這組圖畫所要表達的中心。2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。在把握了文章的中心后， 應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架， 并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、11 / 26短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容。本文是講述上周發(fā)生的事情，故時態(tài)要以過去時為主，人稱是第一人稱，盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。運用適當?shù)膯卧~或短語正確表達各圖的意思。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，

24、要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。一篇文章寫好后，應(yīng)進行檢查，看短文中是否有錯，如拼寫、用詞、時態(tài)、語態(tài)及表達方面的錯誤。5. 宜詳則詳，該略則略。對于一些細節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫作過程中是不可將其忽略的。如果是可有可無的細節(jié)，則可視具體情況進行增刪。據(jù)此，我們在讀圖時一定要注意閱讀各圖中的一些細節(jié)內(nèi)容，看其是否影響文章的內(nèi)容?！緷M分范文】last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the au

25、thentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. in order to deliver a clear presentation, i slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. absorbed in every move of 12 / 26mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt

26、help taking pictures from time to time. next came the moment when i asked them to have a try themselves. washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. the tea house witnessed a really enjoyabl

27、e time for all of us. at the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. it suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. and i swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all o

28、ver the world. 【例 02】（2018 年江蘇卷）請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章?！緦懽鲀?nèi)容】1. 用約 30 個詞概括上述利用排名（ratings ）進行消費的現(xiàn)象；13 / 262. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M排名，然后用2-3 個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法?！緦懽饕蟆?. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 不必寫標題?！驹u分標準】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。_ _ _ _ _ 【思路點撥】今年作文仍然是讀寫作文，即先用30 詞概括閱讀材料，然后針對材料中的話題寫一篇議論文談看法。 首先要認真閱讀兩段有

29、關(guān)消費排名現(xiàn)象及觀點的純文字材料，然后進行比較和分析，表明態(tài)度，作出價值判斷。文章首段要簡要介紹兩段材料，第一段材料為一對母子買旅行箱看了網(wǎng)上的評論，結(jié)果買回來的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好。第二段材料為一幫人去餐館吃飯，看了on-line rating，結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出online rating的不靠譜。然后寫你對 online rating的看法，表明觀點，注意用2-3 個論據(jù)來支撐自己的看法。文章屬于議論文，要注意主題句的使用，論點之間要注意有條理。文章可主要采14 / 26用一般現(xiàn)在時，第三人稱來寫?！緷M分范文】possible version one: as a major chann

30、el of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers. there is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. the advant

31、ages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. it is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. possible version two: nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. these ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in cu

32、stomers purchase decision. however, results are sometimes unsatisfactory. there is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. as we all know, 15 / 26most of the ratings are based on others judgment on the product or service concer

33、ned. every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. apparently, blindly following others advice will affect our own judgment. another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. it has become a c

34、ommon practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales. therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping. 【例 03】假如你是一名大學生叫李華，請就大學就業(yè)問題，從大學畢業(yè)生的心態(tài)、就業(yè)形勢以及就業(yè)前景幾個方面， 針對近年來大學畢業(yè)生就業(yè)情況給報社寫一封120 字左右的信件談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要點如下：1. 學生心態(tài)向往城

35、市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)；2. 就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩；農(nóng)村渴求人才；3. 就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。_16 / 26_ 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達屬于書信類短文，寫作時要仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：1. 學生心態(tài)向往城市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)；2. 就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩；農(nóng)村渴求人才；3. 就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。另外提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)?。根?jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱使用第一人稱。注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的

36、亮點。還要適當使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫?！痉段馁p析】dear editor, i am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, unwilling to work in the countryside. so it is difficult for them to find proper jobs. therefore, a

37、s college students we should have the right attitude towards ourselves and the job. i believe we can have as bright a future in the 17 / 26countryside as we have in the city. yours，li hua 仿真訓練：（1）前不久，中央電視臺報道了貴州十歲男孩獨自照顧重病媽媽的故事，引起社會極大反響。假如你是某校高三學生李華，請根據(jù)以下要點用英語向某英語報社寫一封信。1、呼吁社會愛心捐助；2、學會感恩；3、結(jié)合實際談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

38、注意：1、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)；2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)120 個左右。dear editor , i m a student of senior three. not long ago, from cctv, i learned that a ten-year-old boy in guizhou was taking care of his seriously sick mother in hospital alone, by which i was deeply moved ._ 18 / 26yours sincerely , li hua 【范文】dear ed

39、itor , i m a student of senior three. not long ago, from cctv, i learned that a ten-year-old boy in guizhou was taking care of his seriously sick mother in hospital alone, by which i was deeply moved china is a great country and chinese people think highly of traditional virtues. it is what the chil

40、d did for his mother that sets us students a good example. first, something should be done for the little boy and his family. we appeal to the whole society to donate money or do something else to help them out of the difficulty. second, our schools should help to develop the spirit of being gratefu

41、l to the society, teachers as well as parents. last but not least, our government should continue, to improve the medical insurance system, especially to support those who are badly in need of medical care. as students, not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should be helpful, bear grat

42、itude in mind and overcome difficulties bravely and wisely. yours sincerely , li hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】19 / 26本文是書信類作文， 要求就貴州十歲男孩獨自照顧重病媽媽的故事用英語向某英語報社寫一封信。文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點包括進去， 不能有遺漏。 而且要發(fā)揮自己的想象， 充實內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：first ，second， besides, whats more等，讓文

43、章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔?！玖咙c說明】 所給范文語言簡潔， 應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： think highly of 高度評價， in need of 需要，bear sth. in mind 記住， it is what the child did for his mother that sets us students a good example. 這句話用了主語從句和強調(diào)句， appeal to sb. to do sth 呼吁某人做 . ，as well as 不但而且， to improve the medical insurance sy

44、stem, especially to support those who are badly in need of medical care. 這句話用了定語從句， not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should be helpful, bear gratitude in mind and overcome difficulties bravely and wisely.這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章使用了 first, second, last but not least這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更連貫。（2）近來我國多地霧霾天氣不

45、斷增多，極大地影響了人們的健康與生活。請你根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇文章，向某英語報社投稿。提示：1. 實況描述2. 對生活造成的影響3. 分析霧霾形成的原因20 / 264. 提出治理污染的建議。注意： 1. 上下文連貫，行文流暢。 2. 詞數(shù) 100-120 ( 首句已給出，并不計入詞數(shù))。霧霾天氣 the hazy weather 口罩 mask dear editor, recently many places in china were blanketed with thick fog. _ yours, li hua 【范文】dear editor, recently many pla

46、ces in china were blanketed with thick fog. everything around disappeared from our sight. some highways were closed. more traffic jams and accidents happened .people had to wear masks .whats worse, many people found it difficult to breathe. 21 / 26best regards, yours，li hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基

47、本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚， 不能有遺漏。除了表達這些要點以外， 還要給出自己的建議，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮， 在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如： first ，second， besides, whats more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔?！玖咙c說明】 所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：contributed a lot to 有助于，play an important role起著重要的作用， send off排放， in my o

48、pinion在我看來，call on 號召。范文中的句式多變， 運用不同的語法知識： many people found it difficult to breathe.這句話用了固定句型， some factories which cause pollution should be closed down . 這句話用了定語從句， only in this 22 / 26way can we expect to have more sunny days . 這句話用了倒裝句。還有范文用了 whats worse, first, second , besides , 這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫

49、。（3）隨著時代的發(fā)展，人們的閱讀方式也在逐漸改變，越來越多的人喜歡使用手機或互聯(lián)網(wǎng)來進行日常閱讀。請根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文發(fā)到你的博客上。電子閱讀方式的優(yōu)點電子閱讀方式的缺點1. 方便快捷2. 信息量大3. 節(jié)省紙張1. 不利于培養(yǎng)良好的閱讀習慣2. 不利于身體健康3. 影響視力你的看法電子閱讀 : e-reading注意：詞數(shù)不少于120 個。_ 【范文】23 / 26nowadays more people choose to read on their mobile phones or computers. e-reading has become a popular

50、way of reading，especially among young people. e-reading is much more convenient than traditional reading. you can read at any time or place if you like. also，you can scan a lot of information on the internet. more importantly，it can save paper，thus protecting our forest resources. despite the advant

51、ages of e-reading， there are also some disadvantages. firstly，e-reading does not help to develop good reading habits.because there is so much information，it is hard to do deep reading. secondly，the radiation of electronic devices will do harm to our health. thirdly，if you stare at screens for a long

52、 time，your eyesight will be damaged. in my view，everything has its advantages and disadvantages. whether these advantages outweigh the disadvantages depends on what you want to achieve. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是提綱類寫作，考生要先審清題目要求，本文的話題是電子閱讀的優(yōu)缺點，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，內(nèi)容有：1. 電子閱讀方式的優(yōu)點 ; 2. 電子閱讀方式的缺點 3. 你的看法，要點還是比較詳細的，但考生要適當增加細節(jié)，特別是闡述自己的觀點的時候，要結(jié)合自己的生活進行闡述。明確作文的基本內(nèi)容后，就是選用準確的詞匯和恰當?shù)木渥觼肀磉_。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：besides, what s more 等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。24 / 26【亮點說明】 范文要點明確，語言精煉，好