高校自主招生筆試作文題點(diǎn)撥(語文和英語)

1、高校自主招生筆試語文作文題點(diǎn)撥名校自主招生測(cè)試舉行在即。從上幾年測(cè)試科目?jī)?nèi)容來看,自主招生測(cè)試中的英語、語文作文是考生的一大軟肋,也是很重要的一項(xiàng)測(cè)試內(nèi)容。為此,記者特地找來幾位滬上自主招生輔導(dǎo)專家,分析自主招生作文題,為考生進(jìn)行考前特別點(diǎn)撥。語文作文點(diǎn)撥改革開放30年將成熱點(diǎn)指導(dǎo)名師:語文高級(jí)教師周萍沉重的轉(zhuǎn)身沒有人能夠體會(huì)到母親在分娩時(shí)的痛苦,除非親身體驗(yàn);沒有人能感受到社會(huì)在前行時(shí)的步履維艱,除非親身參與;也沒有人能真正了解一個(gè)國(guó)家在變革時(shí)所產(chǎn)生的緊迫感和使命感,除非自己就是這個(gè)國(guó)家的公民。2008年,注定將成為中國(guó)歷史上值得書寫的一頁,成為值得每個(gè)中國(guó)人難以忘懷的記憶。三十年前開始的“

2、改革開放”,三十年以后回望,讓人感慨萬千。如果當(dāng)時(shí)在國(guó)家的命運(yùn)和前途處于“變”還是“不變”的選擇面前,改革元?jiǎng)讉冞x擇的是“不變”,現(xiàn)在我們的生活將會(huì)怎樣。即使是在以封建保守為主要特征的中國(guó)歷史中,勇于改革的人物并不少。我們能一一歷數(shù)他們?cè)谡误w制、經(jīng)濟(jì)政策上的革除陋習(xí)、打破陳規(guī),但往往忽略了他們悲慘的結(jié)局,遭遇攻擊甚至以自己的生命為代價(jià)來換取人們對(duì)改革的認(rèn)同。從秦時(shí)的李斯到明代的張居正,難道他們沒有預(yù)料到自己的政治理想是要改變?nèi)藗円呀?jīng)習(xí)慣的生活秩序?難道沒有預(yù)料到也許自己的結(jié)局就是“不成功,便成仁”?但是,他們還是選擇了“變”,無論是大刀闊斧地變還是小心翼翼地變。三十年的選擇究竟是怎樣決定的,

3、我們可以肯定,這個(gè)決定是以“為人民謀福祉”、“為中國(guó)崛起”為目標(biāo),是建立在深思熟慮、斟酌再三的基礎(chǔ)之上,而絕非個(gè)人意志。這些改革的先導(dǎo)未必沒有考慮到在中國(guó)要進(jìn)行涉及面這樣廣的改革是多么困難,也未必沒有考慮到會(huì)遭遇多么巨大的阻礙,但是正如歷史前賢一樣,他們選擇的是“人民”、“國(guó)家”而非自己。的確,在中國(guó),任何領(lǐng)域的一次小小的變革,都會(huì)牽一發(fā)而動(dòng)全身。這個(gè)國(guó)家有太豐厚的歷史。燦爛輝煌的傳統(tǒng)文化成為我們向外人炫耀的資本,“夜郎自大”的情緒悄然滋生,殊不知,那是前人的輝煌和我們無關(guān);近代中國(guó)歷史是一部被殖民被壓迫的屈辱史,直面這些,我們又變成了魯迅先生筆下的“祥林嫂”,整天哭訴自己的不幸,仿佛全世界的

4、人都能施以援手,殊不知,“有人幫你,是你的幸運(yùn),沒有人幫你,是你的命運(yùn)”輝煌也好,屈辱也罷,歷史需要牢記,但不能成為改革進(jìn)程上的羈絆。昔日的榮耀,應(yīng)該成為今日改革中智慧的源泉;昔日的恥辱,應(yīng)該成為明日崛起時(shí)的動(dòng)力。在這三十年里,沒有范本,沒有經(jīng)驗(yàn),我們走出的是屬于自己的路。有曲折,有坎坷,有徘徊,有迷茫,可值得慶幸的是,跌跌撞撞我們走了過來。在這三十年里,有成功,有失敗,有喜悅,有悲傷,未來的路究竟怎么走,也許還只是藍(lán)圖;但有一點(diǎn)確定無疑,我們必須把改革堅(jiān)持下去。這三十年里,所發(fā)生一切,歷史將會(huì)怎么評(píng)判,我們不得而知,但我們珍惜現(xiàn)有的幸福,對(duì)未來充滿了憧憬。當(dāng)然,對(duì)這三十年,我們更需要進(jìn)行深刻

5、的反思。我們的國(guó)家整體經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)力躋身世界前列,但社會(huì)貧富差距在拉大;我們的科學(xué)技術(shù)水平達(dá)到了世界先進(jìn)水平,而國(guó)民文明素養(yǎng)尚需改進(jìn);我們的法律常識(shí)有明顯加強(qiáng),但公民意識(shí)等卻還是軟肋。如史學(xué)家唐德剛所說,從鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)算起,中國(guó)要完成向現(xiàn)代文明的轉(zhuǎn)型,要通過歷史的“三峽”,到2040年,也正好兩百年?；赝^去的三十年,真心希望在以后的三十年里,中國(guó)走好。高校自主招生筆試英語作文題點(diǎn)撥英語作文點(diǎn)撥準(zhǔn)備校園現(xiàn)象闡釋-指導(dǎo)名師:上外附中英語高級(jí)教師胡迦針對(duì)2009年名校自主招生測(cè)試,上外附中英語高級(jí)教師胡迦為考生出了兩道作文題。其中一題是書信形式。胡老師指出,上海交通大學(xué)在冬令營(yíng)測(cè)試中,曾經(jīng)有過三次以英語書信

6、的形式出作文題,因此書信類型的題目考生必須加以重視。胡迦老師同時(shí)建議考生,一旦遇到書信類作文,要注意書信的規(guī)范格式。英語作文范文(一:你想報(bào)考清華大學(xué),而你的父母卻希望你報(bào)考本地的名牌大學(xué),請(qǐng)以化名李華的名義寫一封信說服父母同意你報(bào)考清華大學(xué)。Jan,1st,2009 Dear parents,I know its abit hard/difficult for you to accept my choice to apply to TsinghuaUniversity (for further study. You have beent aking good care of me durin

7、g the past 18 years and in your eyes Im a good boy who is always willing to follow your advice.But this time I do hope that you can allow me to make my own decision.Tsinghua University, one of the top universities worldwide /regarded as the kingdom of academy, has appealed to numerous excellent appl

8、icants. Not only do they admire these distinguished scholars but also they can share the advanced teaching facilities a nd reference resources. In addition,graduates from Tsinghua are bound to have more chances to find rewarding jobs. In this competitive society ,I can prove myself an outstanding ta

9、lent and make great contributions to the development of our nation.I know you are worried that I cant look after myself if I go to Tsinghua.However,this will enable me to learn how to live independently and stand on my own feet. I really hope you can understand me and support my decision, which will

10、benefit my future.Yours,HuaL i 胡迦老師出的第二道題目是對(duì)“公布學(xué)生成績(jī)”這一校園現(xiàn)象的闡釋,胡老師表示,出這道題目是考慮到該現(xiàn)象與學(xué)生的讀書生活、自我成長(zhǎng)意識(shí)息息相關(guān),因此有必要讓學(xué)生了解并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備。英語作文范文(二:有些重點(diǎn)中學(xué)為了在自主招生或直推中以示公正,往往會(huì)公布學(xué)生的成績(jī)或排名,請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶āith the adoption of the quality-education policy, many advanced teaching method shave been introduced to China, Meanwhile, m

11、any middle schools still find it a good and fair way to publicize to scores and ranks to introduce good candidates to take independent tests by key universities.Competition is part of our modern life.If I know the exact position where I am, I will spare no effort to catch up with others. Besides, we

12、 will face the pressure that making scores publicized appliestous.We,Senior Three students,have no choice but to adapt ourselves to all the pressure, which helps us stimulate passion of study.Though no one is to blame except myself ifthe ranks are made known, test scores are private. In many experts

13、 eyes,individual student should have his own right of privacy.Its time for education authority to create a better environment to promotequality-education,where every student can really improve himself and develop full personality.高校自主招生最常問到的英語面試問題First One: Work experience"work experience"

14、 is the type of work you've done in the past. If you haven't started working yet you can say "Right now I'm still a student." or "I'm a recent grad and Ihaven't started working yet." In the second sentence, "recent grad" is short for "recent gra

15、duate" and means that you have just finished school.請(qǐng)告訴我你過去的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn),工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)就是你過去所做的工作。如果尚未開始工作,就可以回答“Right now I'm still a student.”(現(xiàn)在我還是個(gè)學(xué)生?；蛘哒f“I'm a recent grad and I haven't started working yet.”(我剛剛畢業(yè),還沒有開始工作?！皉ecent grad”是“recent graduate”的縮寫,意思是剛剛畢業(yè)。Second One: What's your grea

16、test weakness?This is a popular question that western employers like to ask to make candidates nervous! In fact, they ask this to know how you respond to a difficult question. You shouldn't answer by telling your greatest weakness since you might not get the job! Instead, you can tell them somet

17、hing that isn't directly related to the job position.你最大的缺點(diǎn)是什么?西方老板特別愛問這個(gè)問題,讓面試者感到很緊張。事實(shí)上,他問這個(gè)問題是看你對(duì)棘手問題的反應(yīng)。你沒必要如實(shí)回答你的弱點(diǎn),因?yàn)槟怯锌赡茏屇愕貌坏竭@份工作。相反,你可以告訴他們一些與工作不直接相關(guān)的事情。Third One: Why do you feel you are qualified for this job?This question is a good opportunity to brag a little bit. You should talk abo

18、ut some extra skills you have that maybe wasn't included in your resume, or talk about your greatest strength in more detail.你為什么覺得自己勝任這份工作?這時(shí)候你要充分發(fā)揮你的“自夸”本領(lǐng)。你可以講述一些簡(jiǎn)歷資料里面沒有包括的技能;或者是再詳細(xì)強(qiáng)調(diào)一下你的特長(zhǎng)。Fourth One: What kind of salary did you have in mind?Salary is how much money you earn, usually per ye

19、ar. When asked this, it's best to answer with a salary range or approximation and not an exact figure. This shows that you are familiar with the industry if you know what the approximate salary should be.你期望的薪水是多少?“salary”就是你賺多少錢,通常是年收入?；卮疬@個(gè)問題時(shí),最好說出一個(gè)大致范圍,而不是一個(gè)確切的數(shù)字。如果你能說出這個(gè)工資范圍,那就說明你對(duì)此行業(yè)非常了解。門會(huì)

20、反對(duì),為什么?","2010年上海世博會(huì)對(duì)上海經(jīng)濟(jì)有何影響?你是否贊成世博會(huì)在上 海舉辦?為什么?","你對(duì)安樂死有何看法?為何我們要禁止安樂死?"等.這更要求學(xué)生 平時(shí)關(guān)心各種事件,只有對(duì)相關(guān)內(nèi)容了解越多,回答起來越能自信地侃侃而談. 此外,一些基本的文史和社會(huì)常識(shí)也必須具備."兩會(huì)是哪兩會(huì)","說出全國(guó)政協(xié)常委 成員名字","'莊周化蝶'反映了莊子怎樣的價(jià)值觀念?","談?wù)?#39;先天下之憂而憂,后天下之 樂而樂'的意義"等. 最后,學(xué)生要