第1講寫(xiě)作基本功訓(xùn)練正確使用動(dòng)詞及情景作文介紹

1、網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程 內(nèi)部講義寫(xiě)作基本功訓(xùn)練（正確使用動(dòng)詞）及情景作文介紹教 師：宋煥然愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起，提倡使用“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你寫(xiě)作基本功訓(xùn)練 1-基本單詞拼寫(xiě)animalaffectaffordabilityaboveafraidabroadannounceagainstabsenceanxiousagreementabsentapartmentagricultureacceptapologizeaheadaccidentappearAIDSachieveappreteairlineachievementareaairportacrossarguealiveactiveargument

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3、0021：00 everyday）“名師” 答疑室隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)互動(dòng)寫(xiě)作基本功練習(xí) 2詞組A校園生活1、喜歡/ 對(duì)感l(wèi)ike (better, best)be fond of sth.beenjoyerested in sth.ngprefer to do sth. be attracted bybe willing to do sth. be eager to do2、一心撲在 上3、擅長(zhǎng)于在 方面取得好成績(jī)4、在方面取得進(jìn)步5、通過(guò)不及格6、學(xué)習(xí)/ 選修 （課程）7、努力學(xué)習(xí)8、在方面獲得成功9、在 (課堂、工作)上表現(xiàn)積極10、積極參加11、開(kāi)會(huì)開(kāi)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)就進(jìn)行12、在 競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)13、忙于

4、14、充分利用（時(shí)間、精力.）15、畢業(yè)put one s heart be good atdo well inomake (r) progress in sth.pass an examination fail in e / take English, Chwork hard atsucceed inng sthbe active in class / at work take an active part in sth.e / hold a meetinga sports meetwa heated discuonheprize in competitionng / with sth.be

5、 busymake full use of ones time / energy graduate fromget on well with sb.get on well with sth.16、與相處融洽在方面進(jìn)展不錯(cuò)17、在 方面有 沒(méi)有18、就給提出建議19、因表?yè)P(yáng)/責(zé)備20、花時(shí)間做e some difficulty ine no .ng sth.give sb. some advice on how to do sth.praise / blame sb. forng sth.spend time on sth. / (in)ng sth. 第 2 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 ev

6、eryday）“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你寫(xiě)作基本功訓(xùn)練 3正確使用動(dòng)詞1It (be) 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I (walk) along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man (come) out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I (see) a yellow car (drive) up Third Street and (make) a right turno ParkRoad. The next m

7、oment the car (hit) the man while he (cross) the road. He (fall)wicry. The car (not stop) but (drive) ot great speed (head)west. I (notice) the driver (be) a young woman and the plate number (be)AC864. About two minutes later I (stop) a (pass) car and (take) the old man to the nearest hospital.2Dear

8、 Bob，Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Id like toabout my hometown Jiangcheng.l you somethingThe city (stand) on the bof the Changjiang River. It (be) a beautiful placefor people to live in. Its economy (develop) ralyhe past ten years. New factories,hous

9、es and roads (build). More schools and hospitals (be) availablefor its people. However, there (be) still some problems, such as water and air pollution andheavy traffic in rush hours.y opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I also (think)t the growth of its population should

10、(control) sot we(e) a better hometown in future.Yours,Xiaohua3Explore Your Dream World is a famous website, which often (publish) itserestingsurveys. This time 3,502 students (test) and the results (be) as follows: 27% of the (test) students find themselves (stay) with their dream boyfriendsirlfrien

11、dsheir dreams. (Fall) down from a high place, (explore) an unknown worldand (fly) also (appear) in a lot of dreams, each (share)rcentage of21. Another 5% of the students (dream) of (be) a millionaire iy short timewhile 3% of them (eat) whatever they want when (dream). Only 2% of them (quarrel) with

12、otheople during their dreams.The result really (erest) me and I like the idea of (explore) theunknowny dreams . I am fed up with the normal world around me and Id like to (experience) something unusual all by myselfy dream world. 第 3 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 答疑室 隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)互動(dòng)4Dear Tom,In your last, y

13、ou (show) greaterest in our National Stadium- the Birds Nest.Now Id like to (roduce) it to you.The Birds Nest is located on North Fourth Ring Road in Beijing, and (cover) an area of58,000 square meters wiseating capacity of about 90 thousand. Its construction (start) inDecember, 2003 and (complete)

14、in 2007. It (look) just like a birds nest (make) of tree branches. During the Olympic Games, we (host) the track and field events and soccer matches there and now it (use) for large-scale events.I hopeby yourself.t myroduction (satisfy) you and you can come (visit) it somedayYours， sincerely, 第 4 頁(yè)

15、址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你情景作文 1高考情景作文介紹- 情景作文的寫(xiě)作要求（內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的完整性上下文的連貫說(shuō)明）詞匯和句式的多樣性及語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性- 情景作文的評(píng)分原則以要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容定檔次以語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量定分?jǐn)?shù)（注重整體語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力）-情景作文的給分檔次和要求 第 5 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）第一檔1820 分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)運(yùn)用了多樣的句式和豐富的詞匯語(yǔ)法或用詞有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤；體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。第二檔1517 分完全完成了試題規(guī)定

16、的任務(wù)；基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；運(yùn)用的句式和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)要求；語(yǔ)法和 用詞基本準(zhǔn)確；使用了簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容連貫。第三檔1214 分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的覆蓋了內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；運(yùn)用的句式和詞匯基本滿足任務(wù)要求；語(yǔ)法和用詞有一些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。第四檔611 分未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息漏掉或未描述清楚主要內(nèi)容；所用句式和詞匯有限；語(yǔ)法或用詞的錯(cuò)誤影響了對(duì)所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容的理解。第五檔15 分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容；句式單調(diào)、用詞貧乏；語(yǔ)法或用詞錯(cuò)誤較多，嚴(yán)重影響了對(duì)所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容的理解?！懊麕煛?答疑室 隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)

17、互動(dòng)- 2008、2009、2010 年高考情景作文介紹2008高考情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生，為校刊英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇題為 “Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過(guò)程。amusement parkbin提示詞：游樂(lè)園箱Step 1- 審中文信息Step 2 - 審圖圖 1 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 2 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：圖 3 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 4 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：Onesible verLast Thursday, wehad a class mee

18、ting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came upwith several choi, such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finallywe decided to go mountain climbing. 第 6 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你The next day, we set off earlyhe morning. While climbing t

19、he mountain,njoyed the warmsunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here andthere, such as bottles and bananas peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards,ut therubbisho the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We

20、were tired buppy.例文分析1anized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, weLastk our classdiscussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain-climbing instead of other choi playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits, we started our spring

21、 outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sliketestsand we were soaked uphe warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top ofthe mountain. Wasted bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty ofthe nature. Feeling a great pity for the

22、tourists,icked up the rubbish and carefully divided themo twogroups：recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. Aftert,ut the rubbisho the bin differently.We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though clearing up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were fill

23、ed with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.Evaluation:2on where to go for our spring outing. Some students wanted toLastk, there was a heated-discusgo to amusement park, some considered to go boating and others gave their ideas for climbing. Eventually, we decided to take a climb.The next

24、 day, all of us prepared well. With our enjoyment, each of us climbed the mountain full ofenergy. However, when we got to the top of the mountain, what covered our eyeswas the mass ofrubbish. It was really a pityt the rubbish destroyed a beautiful scenery.ast, we made up our mind topick up the rubbi

25、sh. After a while, with everyoffort, the rubbish was cleared off immediay and weput themo the recycled and unrecycled bins.y eyes, this spring outing not only gave us lots of pleasure, but also gave us a meaningful lesson.Only to protect our environment, can we get a beautiful society. Therefore, I

26、hope everyone can join us to make our home clean and tidy.Evaluation: 第 7 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 答疑室 隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)互動(dòng)3k our Class1 Senior 3 in Red Star High school had an unusual spring outing.LastThe day before we left, our classmates had a heated discusabout the destination of the outing.Some studen

27、tggested the amusement park, while others preferred boating and mountain climbing. Whenit came to practice, we wereing a good time climbingast. However, at the top of the mountain, wewere angry rathern shocked to find outt loads of rubbish were discovered everywhere . Meanwhile, itcaur mindt we had

28、to clean this mep. Thus, after recycling the rubbish in different bins, wewere all very cheerful spring outing.Evaluation:t we not only returned the beauty back to the mountain, but also had a wonderful4y class decided to go out for a spring outing. Some of us wanted to go toLastk, the studentsthe a

29、musement park. Some wanted to go boating and some wanted to climb the mountain. Finally wedecided to climb the mountain.I was a shiny day. All of us were. But when we reached the top of the mountain. We foundtrubbish everywhere!icked the rubbish and threw themo the dustbin.I think, we shouldnt threw

30、 the rubbish everywhere and we should do our best to protect the environment. The more we do, the more beautiful the earth will be!Evaluation:2009 高考情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹(shù)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs 第

31、8 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 資料室免費(fèi)資料任你Step 1- 審中文信息Step 2 -審圖圖 1 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 2 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：圖 3 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 4 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：Onesible verApril 12 is memorabecause our class had a meaningful experience ont day.he morning, webicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the wa

32、y. Upon arrival, we began to workimmediay. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were wateringthem. After getting the work done,ut up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leavingwe took some photocord our green action. Seeing the lines of trees

33、, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.例文分析1Green Action in Our ClassI am Li Hua from Class 1 Senior 3 in HongXing middle school. On April 12th our class activity to plant trees in suburbs to make our country more beautiful.anized anEarlyhe m

34、orning on April 12th, my classmates and I went to the suburbs by bicycle. And there wasan awful lot of breath-taking scenery on our way there which could be just appreted in rural areas, seeing, 第 9 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 答疑室 隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)互動(dòng)green mountains, golden wheat field and so on, which brought

35、 us great joys.When we got there, we wento working at once. Some of us dug holes to plant trees and some of ustook the little trees to the holes. Whats more, there were also some careful girls watering the trees whichwere just planted.nks to our great efforts, all the trees were soon planted and two

36、 of our classmates evenput up a board reading “l(fā)ove and protect the trees” in front of the little forest made by us. After all the hardwork, we also took photos of our whole class with tools in our hand in front of the trees.Exhausted buppy, we had a significant day and I hope our country will be mo

37、re beautiful because ofthe decorating of trees!Evaluation:2Im Li Hua a student of Senior 3 class of Hong Xing Middle School.In order to respond to the appellation of making our country greener, our class decided to go to suburbs to plant trees on April, 12th.Earlyhe morning, we went to the destinati

38、on by bike. There are many trees and rice by the side ofthe road. On our way to there,njoyed the beautiful view and talked happily. As soon as we got there, webegan to work. Some of us dug, some buried, some watered and the rest took the trees to plawhere needthem. Aftlanting trees, we chose an obvi

39、ous place to make a sign read “ Protect trees” stand to preventpeople from cutting trees.ast, we took photos in front of the trees. Almost worn out as we were, weextremely excited, for we did a qualification deed.Evaluation:3Hong Xing middle school had an activity to make the country greenn before o

40、n April 12th. Classone grade three students made the action in suburbs.of all, they mecountry roadhe morning andwent to the suburbs by bike. After the arrived at the suburbs they began to planted the tree and watered thetree. While they finished planting, they made a sign beside the trees. The words

41、 the trees. Finally they took some photos and back to the home.What a meaningful day!Evaluation:he sign are please protect 第 10 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你2010 高考情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的學(xué)生，利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去的旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫(xiě)一篇英文周記，敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過(guò)程。注意：1、周記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2、詞數(shù)不少于 60。Lastkend, I helped m

42、y grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.Step 1- 審中文信息Step 2 -審圖圖 1 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 2 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：圖 3 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：圖 4 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：細(xì)節(jié)：Onesible VerLast kend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents, I searched theernet for the train

43、schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, andsome hoinformation.he afternoon, I went to the train sion and managed to buy two tickets for mygrandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packedo the suitcase the things mygrandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. Th

44、e next morning, I went to the sionto see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I fel journey.ppy for them and wished them a safe 第 11 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 答疑室 隨時(shí)隨地提問(wèn)互動(dòng)例文分析1ernet with my grandparents for some information. While grandpa wasOn Saturday, I searched theconcerned with

45、the hos and grandma worried about the weather there, I focusedon the traickets. Withmy help, they got all thes quickly.he afternoon, I went to the train sion to get the tickets I had booked on the there was long queue, I got the tickets within 20 minutes.ernet. Althoughhe evening, I helped my grandm

46、othack he suitcase for the trip. Nothing was missedumbrellain case it would rain; a map of Beidaihe, two pairs of sunglasses to prevent the burning sunlight and some T-shirts and slippers. Grandpa patted on my head and praised met I had grown up. I felt proud.Earlyhe morning on Sunday, I waved them

47、good bye at the train sion and wished them aneresting and relaxing trip. Seated on the chairshe train, they sd and waved back, eyes twinklingand fabrightened up.Grandpa and grandmae devoted so much to me, from raising me up to teaching melife-philosophies. Now Im a grow-up, I feel a strong need and

48、responsibility to pay them back. reason why I did this. I love my grandparents.Evaluation:ts the2kend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.Lastof all, I surfed theernet to get some information about the trip. I searched the cost of the hoand traickets and the condition of weather

49、. Then I bought two tickets at the sion. Next, I helped themprepare their luggage. I and my grandma put a map, two sunglasses, sweaters, laptops and an umbrella the bag. Finally, I saw them off on the platform at night.oI thought what I did was very meaningful. And I was satisfied with myself forEva

50、luation:ng these things.3kend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.Last At, I used the computer to find how to book the traickets and my grandpa wanted to knowwhere will they live, and which ho Beidaihe.is better. My grandma wanted to know what is the weather like inThen I went t

51、o the “Solding tickets sion” to buy two tickets.Return my home, I prepares two glasses and a map of Beidaihe for them and took some clothes, shoes he box, at this time my grandpa came in and let me take the umbrella.Finally, I took my grandparents to the train which from Beijing to Beidaihe, and sai

52、d good-bye to them. I hope they cane a good trip.Evaluation: 第 12 頁(yè) 址：（9：0021：00 everyday）“名師” 資料室 免費(fèi)資料任你參考寫(xiě)作基本功訓(xùn)練 3正確使用動(dòng)詞1It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I

53、saw a yellow car drive up ThirdStreet and make a right turno Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing theroad. He fell wicry. The car didnt stut drove ot great speed heading west. I noticed the driverwas a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes late

54、r I stopped took the old man to the nearest hospital.2sing car andThe city stands on the bof the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Itseconomy has been develoralyhe past ten years. New factories, houses and roadse beenbuilt. More schools and hospitals are available for

55、its people. However, there are still some problems, suchas water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.y opinion, Jiangcheng should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also thinkt the growth of its population should be controlled sotwell e a better hometown in future.Yours,Xiaohua

56、3Explore Your Dream World is a famous website, which often publishes itseresting surveys. Thistime 3,502 students were/ are tested and the results are as follows: 27% of the tested students findthemselves staying with their dream boyfriendsirlfriendsheir dreams. Falling down from a highplace, exploring an unknown world and flying also appear in a lot of dreams, each sharingrcen