【法律類】大作文教材

雅思大作文高級(jí)教材一一法律類一、話題簡介法律類鯉思寫作話題是所有話題類型中考生們普遍反映最怵的，感覺最無從下手的題目當(dāng)屬法律與犯罪類型的題目。由于這部分內(nèi)容可能比較脫離考生的實(shí)際生活，所以寫起來不如環(huán)境類、教育類話題那么的得心應(yīng)手。雖然說這類題目出題的頻率相對(duì)來說并不是非常的頻繁，但是如果學(xué)生在備考中沒有對(duì)此類話題具有針對(duì)性的總結(jié)和復(fù)習(xí)的話，相信很難在寫作中取得什么理想的分?jǐn)?shù)。最常見的話題類型有兩種：.犯罪分子處罰方式即"如何去處理犯罪分子"的問題；具體包括延長監(jiān)禁時(shí)間是最好的處罰方式；應(yīng)該讓罪犯?jìng)兘邮苈殬I(yè)教育；勞動(dòng)體罰是不是最有效的處罰方式；應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)刑法力度來減少犯罪；是否應(yīng)該保留死刑等.特殊人群犯罪情況即"什么人犯罪的問題”的問題；具體包括青少年日益上升的犯罪率，女性犯罪或者老年人犯罪等特殊群體犯罪情況等二、法律類話題分類及思路柘展方法.犯罪分子處罰方式：例題：Puttingcriminalsintoprisonisnoteffectiveindealingwiththeproblem.Educationandjobtrainingshouldbeofferedtothem.Doyouagreeordisagree?犯罪問題，是直接關(guān)進(jìn)監(jiān)獄還是進(jìn)行教育，你是同意還是不同意呢？思路分析：主體分析法、分類法、反正法主體：Criminals;government;victims;thegeneralpublicArgumentsforprison:1）監(jiān)獄同教育或就業(yè)培訓(xùn)相比有很強(qiáng)的阻嚇作用，這樣可以有效的抑制犯罪率的上升，讓人們不敢犯罪。Comparedwitheducationorjobtraining,prisonsmayhavemoreeffectsonstoppingpotentialcriminalsfromcommittingcrimes.Therefore,itcansharplydecreasethecrimerate.Instarkcontrasttoplacingcriminalsoneducationalcoursesoremploymentretraining,prisonsappearmoreeffectiveindeterringpotential,would-bewrongdoersfromcommittingcrimes,thusdrasticallydecreasingthelikelihoodofrisingcrimerate.Detersbfromdoingsth）監(jiān)獄更多的對(duì)罪犯來說是一種懲罰，因此能夠避免再犯。Imprisonmentisalsoawaytopunishpeoplewhohavecommittedcrimes.Asaresult,theyareinthefearofsettingfootintojailseveragainandmaynotcommitacrimeagain.Beinglockedupbehindthebarsisapunitivemeasureimposedoncriminalswhoarehighlyunlikelytoturnintoarecidivistinconsiderationoftheirfearofsettingfootintojailseveragain.Argumentsforeducationandjobretraining1）罪犯在監(jiān)獄里所被包圍的是一群囚犯，這對(duì)罪犯的改造不是好的，反而是不好的影響。接受教育可以讓罪犯在一個(gè)積極的環(huán)境里，真正的意識(shí)到對(duì)與錯(cuò)。Imprisonmenthasthedestructive,ratherthanconstructiveimpactoncriminalswhoarelockedupinprison,surroundedbypeoplewhoprobablyhavecommittedevenmoreseriouscharges.Educationservestocorrectanymisconceptionoreliminatetwistedthoughtstheyhavebyimmersingtheminapositiveenvironment.2）大多數(shù)罪犯往往是沒有什么文化知識(shí)和生存技能，出獄后通常很難找到工作。教育和就業(yè)培訓(xùn)能夠讓他們?cè)谌蘸蟮纳钪锌孔约荷嫦氯?，而不至于因?yàn)闆]有收入來源而再次誤入歧途。Asignificantproportionofcriminalsaresadlyilliteratewithoutadequatefundamentalknowledgeandsurvivalskillsanditwouldn,tbeeasyforthemtofindadecentjobafterbeingreleasedfromthejail.Withconvenientaccesstoeducationandjobretraining,theyareabletosurvivebythemselves,greatlyreducingthechanceofbecomingarecidivistintimeswhentheyarefinanciallychallenged.anincreasingnumberofpeopleanincreasinglypopularissue練習(xí)：Nowadays,wearefacingthtncreasinglyseriouscrimesituation.Cancapitalpunishment（deathpenalty）everbejustified合理的Moreandmore+adj.Itcanbeprovedtobejustifiedthat....Whethersthisjustifiedhastriggere（弓|發(fā)）aheateddebate.現(xiàn)在我們面臨日益嚴(yán)重的犯罪情況，是否應(yīng)該有死刑？思路分析：主體分析法和分類法Argumentsagainstcapitalpunishment1）死刑只是對(duì)罪犯的一種處罰，而并不能夠?qū)⒎缸镄袨橹惺芎φ呱旎?，或者賠償其所遭受的傷害Capitalpunishment,whicheventhoughmanagestobringthecriminalstojustice,couldbynomeanscompensateforphysical,andmentalsufferingsinflictedonvictims,orinsomeextremecases,bringbacktheirlives.）無論一個(gè)人犯多大的錯(cuò)誤，其他人都無權(quán)剝奪其生命。（人權(quán)）deprivesbofsthItisentirelyunjustifiedtodepriveoneofhis/herrightstoliveregardlessofhowinsanelysevereandcrueltheoffenseshe/shehascommittedare.（Thissubjectmatterhasboiledtothecontroversialissueofhumanrights））死刑犯的尸體的處理（是否可以用于器官移植等等）將是一個(gè)非常具有爭(zhēng)議的道德問題。Howthebodyofthedeceasedcriminalisgoingtobedisposedof（usedfororgantransplant,forinstance）willbeboundtoraisegravebothethicalandsocialimplications.Argumentsforcapitalpunishment1）如果死刑犯沒有受到最為嚴(yán)厲的懲罰，那么這對(duì)受害者是不公平的。Itwouldbeonlyfairforthevictimsifthecriminalsaresubjecttothegreatestfearofall---death.2）如果死刑取消的話，那么很多潛在的罪犯就不會(huì)顧忌做出一些極為可怕的犯罪行為。Ifcapitalpunishmentisevertobedoneawaywith,thepotentialwrongdoerswouldn,tbedeterredfromcommittingstaggeringlyseriousoffensesamongwhichserialmurderprovesparticularlyappalling.2.特殊人群犯罪情況：例題：【2010.08.05]Inmanypartsoftheworlchildrenandteenagerarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthiscasehappening?Howshouldchildrenorteenagersbepunished?2015年6月16H雅思寫作范文Insomecountries?ahighproportionofcriminalact,sarecuididittedbyteenagerSrWhyhasthishappened?Whatcanbedonetodealwiththis?原因：.離婚率很高，單親家庭--父母沒有時(shí)間管教，關(guān)心不夠parentsaresobusythattheydon,thavetoomuchtimetogiveparentingtotheirchildren..Notmatureenough,cannotdistinguishrightfromwrong;theylackforself-control本身叛逆期.媒體暴力Solutions」措施具體化，寫出具體可以怎么辦）e.g公司或政府可以規(guī)定一些親子假 employeesshouldbeprovidedsomeholidaysordayofftobeencouragedtospendmoretimewithkids.Eg.Governmentsortherelevantorganizationsaresupposedtodesignsomebooksorbookletsaboutparentingeducation,whichservetoinstructparentstobettereducatetheirkids.Eg.LimitthemediaaboutunhealthycontentsorprogramsbyimposingseriouscensorshipGovernmentsShouldImposeseriouscensorship/hightaxes/higherpenalties開U罰/highfines onprograms/products/criminals思路分析：主體分析法和分類法青少年走上犯罪的道路(embarkonthecriminalroad)的原因是多種多樣的(manifold/various):1)家庭原因：在單親家庭(singleparentfamily)，缺乏家庭的關(guān)愛及正確的引導(dǎo)(lackofconnectednessandlackofparentalcare)，甚至是有些家庭存在著家庭暴力(domesticviolence/familyviolence)，不要給孩子貼上消極意義的標(biāo)簽(label)2)社會(huì)原因:(beledastrayinthecomplicatedsociety)復(fù)雜的社會(huì)背景科技原因：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機(jī)為犯罪提供了新的渠道(anewavenueforcommittingcrimes)withtheadvanceoftheinternetandtechnology,teenagersareexposedtotoomanyunhealthycontents,includingsmoking,onlinegames,drugs,violence,sexandsoon3)學(xué)校原因：學(xué)生承受的同伴帶來的壓力及學(xué)業(yè)壓力、競(jìng)爭(zhēng)壓力(peerpressureandstudypressure,theheatedcompetition)4)思想原因媒體上包括電視、電影、廣告等上面的暴力和血腥的場(chǎng)面(theviolentscenesonthemedia,pornographicorvulgarformsofmedia)5)心理原因：青少年犯罪心理(psychologyofjuveniledelinquency)練習(xí)：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeople.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse.思路分析：主體分析法和分類法闡述青少年吸毒的根源。1）其中最重要的原因在于許多年輕人由于不思進(jìn)取而產(chǎn)生的精神空虛。2）其他一些因素也起了推波助瀾的作用，比如說，對(duì)毒品的無知和好奇，缺乏父母的適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)等。3）毒品本身的令人上癮的本質(zhì)也是不容忽視的。三、常用詞匯thought-provoking弓|人深思的far-reaching深遠(yuǎn)的drawback弊端undertakethedueobligations承擔(dān)責(zé)任break/violate/flout/disobeythelaw觸犯法律commitacrime犯罪Offenses/crimes/criminalacts罪行criminal/offender/culprit才日人/perpetrator罪才犯lawbreakerwrongdoeraccomplice/accessory（noun）從犯（后者指幫助犯罪單未直接參與的人）resentsociety/holdagrudgeagainstsociety憎恨社會(huì)inmate/convicts囚犯victim受害者trauma心理創(chuàng)傷cell牢房細(xì)胞ceiling天花板imprison/incarceratesomeone監(jiān)禁bebroughttojustice被繩之以法lenient寬容的reform/rehabilitatecriminals改造罪犯lawenforcementagencies執(zhí)法部門heinouscrime/flagitiouscrime/felony重罪pettycrime/misdemeanor輕罪first-timeoffender初犯的人hardenedcriminals/repeatcriminals慣犯reverttocrime再次犯罪law-abidingcitizens守法的公民abideby/complywiththelaw遵守法律disregard無視...traumatizesomeone給某人造成心理創(chuàng)傷trackdown/huntdown/capture抓捕criminaltendency犯罪傾向高分句型Manyoftheproblemsyoungpeoplenowexperience,suchasjuveniledelinquency,arisefromthefactthatmanymarriedwomennowworkandarenotathometocarefortheirchildren.現(xiàn)在年輕人面臨的像青少年犯罪等問題，是源自于許多已婚女性走進(jìn)職場(chǎng)，無法在家照看孩子。Oncethejuvenilesreachmaturation,theirsociallyunacceptablebehaviorhasgrownintoalifestyleandtheydevelopintocareercriminals.一旦青年人長大后，對(duì)社會(huì)叛逆的行為就變成了他們的生活方式，進(jìn)而發(fā)展成為職業(yè)犯罪。Theinabilitytocompleteassignmentsandgettingbadgradesmaycreateself-esteemproblems,feelingsofalienationorworthlessness.完不成作業(yè)、學(xué)習(xí)成績不好就會(huì)導(dǎo)致自尊心問題，感覺被疏遠(yuǎn)或是自己毫無價(jià)值。Accordingtothelabelingtheory,onceapersonislabeled,hewillbecomesuchakindofpersonasthelabeldescribes.標(biāo)簽理論認(rèn)為，人一旦被貼上某種標(biāo)簽，就會(huì)成為標(biāo)簽所標(biāo)定的那種人。Therootcausesofcrimearemanyanddiverse.Anyhopeofaddressingthosecausessuccessfullyrequiresmulti-facetedstrategies,whichcanbeimplementedbyneighborhoods,communitiesandvariouslevelsofgovernment.犯罪的根本原因是多重的。成功解決問題的希望在于采取多種策略，需要社區(qū)、及各級(jí)政府的共同努力。Mostparentsworryaboutthattheirchildrenarevulnerabletotheharmfulimpactinsociety.家長最擔(dān)心的就是孩子容易受到社會(huì)的不良影響。Thesejuvenileoffendersareinneedoftreatmentbecausetheyhaveanegativedispositionandhighpropensitytocontinuecommittingcrime.少年犯需要救治，因?yàn)樗麄冃郧橄麡O，有極大可能繼續(xù)犯罪。Foryoungpeoplewhoareaddictedtothecomputergames,itisratherdifficulttodistinguishbetweenfantasyandreality.Grossly/fairly對(duì)于沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的年輕人來說，很難明辨虛幻與現(xiàn)實(shí)。Juvenilecrimeratehasarousedgreatconcerninthesociety.青少年違法犯罪率問題已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)關(guān)注程度最高的問題之一。Prisonerscanbeputtoworkincommunityserviceprojects,whichcanprovidetheprisonerswithvaluabletraining,developthesenseofsocialresponsibility.可以讓囚犯進(jìn)行社區(qū)服務(wù)，這樣可以對(duì)他們進(jìn)行有意義的培訓(xùn)，培養(yǎng)他們的社會(huì)責(zé)任感。五、課堂實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練題目：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage,somesociologistsclaimthatparentsandothermembersofthesocietyoftensetabadexample.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeopleinourmodernsociety.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse..開頭、結(jié)尾和主體部分中文思路這是一篇探討青少年吸毒的議論文。題目中的論述指出，當(dāng)今的青少年濫用毒品的現(xiàn)象十分普遍，并且其年齡正日趨年輕化。某些社會(huì)學(xué)家聲稱父母和其他社會(huì)成員給這些吸毒的青少年樹立了一個(gè)壞榜樣。題目的要求有三方面：一是討論當(dāng)今社會(huì)青少年吸毒成風(fēng)的根源所在，二是談一談青少年吸毒的不良影響，三是提出一些建議來與這種惡劣傾向作斗爭(zhēng)。由此可見，這是一個(gè)典型的問題解決型題目，即在主體段中有三個(gè)小段落，分別講述產(chǎn)生的原因，弓I起的后果和解決的辦法。1）闡述青少年吸毒的根源。指出其中最重要的原因在于許多年輕人由于不思進(jìn)取而產(chǎn)生的精神空虛。其他一些因素也起了推波助瀾的作用，比如說，對(duì)毒品的無知和好奇，缺乏父母的適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)等。另外，毒品本身的令人上癮的本質(zhì)也是不容忽視的。2）闡述青少年吸毒所造成的惡劣影響。而其中最嚴(yán)重的是青少年犯罪率的激增，然后，家庭的破裂不可避免地導(dǎo)致社會(huì)的不安定。對(duì)于吸毒者本身來說，這種行為恰好是對(duì)他們身心的嚴(yán)重摧殘，會(huì)對(duì)他們自身產(chǎn)生非常消極的影響。3）闡述一些切實(shí)可行的解決辦法。其中最行之有效的方法就是提升公眾對(duì)毒品的意識(shí)使他們充分認(rèn)識(shí)到毒品的巨大破壞力。執(zhí)法部門也應(yīng)加強(qiáng)打擊力度，對(duì)毒品犯罪判以重刑。而對(duì)于青少年癮君子來說，首要任務(wù)是讓他們盡快恢復(fù)健康，然后可以現(xiàn)身說法式地來告誡公眾。.范文Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodaysyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Ithasarousedfiercecontroversyastothereasonwhyyoungpeoplechoosetousedrugs.Themostimportantreasonwhyyouthdrugabuseissoprevalentintoday’ssocietyisthespiritualemptinessonthepartofmanyyoungsters.Theyoftenfeelreluctanttostudyor［以…做試驗(yàn)］【句式，……引起了激烈的爭(zhēng)論辯論】【藥物濫用，濫用藥物】【精神空虛】【adj.不情愿的，勉強(qiáng)的；

workhard,sotheyarequiteincapabletodosomethingmeaningfulandtheonlywaytoreleasetheirexcessiveenergyistodosomethingmeaningless.Othercausesofwidespreadyouthdrugabusealsomustbetakenintoaccount.Theseincludeignoranceandcuriosityaboutillegaldrugs,lackofknowledgeandguidancefromadults,andeasyaccesstoandavailabilityofdrugs.Finally,peopleshouldnotignorethefactthatmostillegaldrugsareaddictiveandtheseimmatureteenagerscanhardlyresistthetremendoustemptationoffeelingecstaticundertheinfluenceofthedrugs.頑抗的】【釋修精力】【納入考慮】【對(duì)違法藥品的無知和好奇心】【同位語從句】【adj.不成熟的】【抵抗巨大的誘惑】【adj.狂喜的；入迷的，出神的】頑抗的】【釋修精力】【納入考慮】【對(duì)違法藥品的無知和好奇心】【同位語從句】【adj.不成